The little baby jumps in the sky, climbs into the white mist, picks elixirs, eats the elixirs and eats gods... Enters the mountain stream, enters the demon cave~
Human skin, peeling bones, whirling around, half-life vacation, the world is illusory, timid~
A three-year-old baby eats gods, a six-armed baby kills people, a big-headed baby sniffles, and a little black baby plays with people.
Luofu illusion, fake correct view, spiritual consciousness does not suppress the Three Treasures Crossing, the ivy takes me to the blue sky.
I have a treasure, please watch from the sidelines!
The subject matter is novel and the story is a bit mind-blowing.
I have been reading novels for many years, and usually I read the big ones, and I read the complete novels. I accidentally clicked on this book and discovered a new world. The author's subject matter is very novel. I was a little confused in the first few chapters. When I saw the beginning of Chapter 7, I suddenly became enlightened, and the rest of my imagination was even more enlightening. However, there was a break after Dragon Palace. I guess there is a back-up explanation. It was not until I read the last chapter that I realized that this book is interspersed with time, which is a bit brain-burning. Take a seat and wait for the author to unravel the mystery.
A little suggestion
How should I put it? Just by looking at your name, I can tell that you are probably a very aloof person, and you are also a very aloof person. Nowadays, cool articles are very popular on the Internet. There are not many people who want to bloom a literary flower in the bad land of Internet articles. I admire you very much for this, and I feel that I am not qualified to give you any advice. I just want to give you a small suggestion, that is: your transition is too messy. In terms of filmmaking, it means that the camera movement is not smooth and the plot is too fragmented. The perspective switching is too messy and frequent, and the picture feels broken. What I mean by this is not that you should focus on one perspective when writing, but that there should be a transition in the shift of perspective, not a drone-like flight. Even if you just have an idea in your mind - what that person is doing now, and then switch to that person, you can maintain the overall sense of substitution at a minimum.
I just don't know if cao is a verb or a verb?
Waiting for final remarks.
In the face of the epidemic, first of all, all book friends must take precautions. It has been particularly rampant overseas recently.
Waiting to finish this review!
To be precise, this novel is not finished at all, and has even just begun. However, I am sorry that due to the epidemic or personal reasons, I need to put this book aside temporarily and cannot update it on time. I am very sorry, although I deeply understand that I have no fans.
With this as my final words, I wish you all good health and longevity!
"The Starry Sky of Gods and Demons" is a great read and I look forward to visiting you again.
Chapter 88: This is written to my ex-girlfriend. Some people may think that naming is just a matter of naming.
As for Xinghu, the protagonist's name is Yu Xin. When taken apart, it's like, I'm lucky for the rest of my life, I'm very happy.
Desolate, desolate, desolate
It was deserted, not even a single person scolded me. I wish everyone a Happy New Year in 2021 in advance.
"Shadow Ancestor" Visits
Visiting a masterpiece, the subject matter is very novel and the writing is good. Come on, work hard! If you come back to visit, I will definitely bookmark it. If it disturbs you, please let me know and delete it immediately.
Chapter 62: Old gentleman, have you ever seen a demon? The author has something to say
Yu Xin was beaten to death by Mr. Liu because of his excessive words. The whole play ended... It's strange that the story has just begun, hahaha.
Chapter 58: Morado, please let the author of Santai have something to say
The recent epidemic has become more and more serious. I hope all book friends will take care of themselves. I also want to apologize for the mistakes I made before because it was too messy. In fact, it was a good work. It was ruined by my shallow knowledge and did not bring a good reading experience to everyone.
The subject matter is novel and the story is a bit mind-blowing.
I have been reading novels for many years, and usually I read the big ones, and I read the complete novels. I accidentally clicked on this book and discovered a new world. The author's subject matter is very novel. I was a little confused in the first few chapters. When I saw the beginning of Chapter 7, I suddenly became enlightened, and the rest of my imagination was even more enlightening. However, there was a break after Dragon Palace. I guess there is a back-up explanation. It was not until I read the last chapter that I realized that this book is interspersed with time, which is a bit brain-burning. Take a seat and wait for the author to unravel the mystery.
A little suggestion
How should I put it? Just by looking at your name, I can tell that you are probably a very aloof person, and you are also a very aloof person. Nowadays, cool articles are very popular on the Internet. There are not many people who want to bloom a literary flower in the bad land of Internet articles. I admire you very much for this, and I feel that I am not qualified to give you any advice. I just want to give you a small suggestion, that is: your transition is too messy. In terms of filmmaking, it means that the camera movement is not smooth and the plot is too fragmented. The perspective switching is too messy and frequent, and the picture feels broken. What I mean by this is not that you should focus on one perspective when writing, but that there should be a transition in the shift of perspective, not a drone-like flight. Even if you just have an idea in your mind - what that person is doing now, and then switch to that person, you can maintain the overall sense of substitution at a minimum.
I just don't know if cao is a verb or a verb?
Waiting for final remarks.
In the face of the epidemic, first of all, all book friends must take precautions. It has been particularly rampant overseas recently. Waiting to finish this review! To be precise, this novel is not finished at all, and has even just begun. However, I am sorry that due to the epidemic or personal reasons, I need to put this book aside temporarily and cannot update it on time. I am very sorry, although I deeply understand that I have no fans. With this as my final words, I wish you all good health and longevity!
"The Starry Sky of Gods and Demons" is a great read and I look forward to visiting you again.
Chapter 88: This is written to my ex-girlfriend. Some people may think that naming is just a matter of naming.
As for Xinghu, the protagonist's name is Yu Xin. When taken apart, it's like, I'm lucky for the rest of my life, I'm very happy.
Desolate, desolate, desolate
It was deserted, not even a single person scolded me. I wish everyone a Happy New Year in 2021 in advance.
"Shadow Ancestor" Visits
Visiting a masterpiece, the subject matter is very novel and the writing is good. Come on, work hard! If you come back to visit, I will definitely bookmark it. If it disturbs you, please let me know and delete it immediately.
Chapter 62: Old gentleman, have you ever seen a demon? The author has something to say
Yu Xin was beaten to death by Mr. Liu because of his excessive words. The whole play ended... It's strange that the story has just begun, hahaha.
Chapter 58: Morado, please let the author of Santai have something to say
The recent epidemic has become more and more serious. I hope all book friends will take care of themselves. I also want to apologize for the mistakes I made before because it was too messy. In fact, it was a good work. It was ruined by my shallow knowledge and did not bring a good reading experience to everyone.