When he was young, a girl's words made him abandon the military career his family had planned for him and resolutely step in front of the camera. When they meet again, he carefully lays his plans, drawing the girl who has long since forgotten him into his arms.
One day after they marry, Wen Qing plants her hands on her hips and points at Best Actor Lu, saying indignantly,
"I already had the kissing scene cut. How did this scandal still happen?" Lu Yi looks at her with amusement as the headline on his phone reads: Shocking! Best Actor Lu's First On-Screen Kiss!
"Jealous?"
Wen Qing presses her lips together and turns away, refusing to look at him. Lu Yi steps forward and wraps an arm around her waist.
"I'm happy."
"You did it on purpose?"
Lu Yi laughs so hard his chest shakes. He just wants to see her get jealous.
The biggest problem in the whole text is that there are too many typos, and they affect the perception. There are so many mistakes that I really can't read it. I have to think about what this place means, which is a bit annoying; After watching the movie, I felt that the author's character creation was not particularly good. In the early stage, the female protagonist was quite gentle and strong, and as a screenwriter, she must have good logical thinking skills. After they got together, it was like losing her mind. Her personality completely changed and she started to look silly and sweet; the male protagonist is Although the actor, who comes from a superior family and has a cold personality, does not need flattery, he still needs to be well-mannered in the industry for so many years, because it is incomprehensible that he would sneer at others because of the heroine's lack of good looks, and he would go on strike from time to time. It's hard to read the next twenty or thirty chapters, and the ending is a bit inexplicable. The author's writing style and plot structure need to be strengthened.
The heroine was a bit stupid in the later stage, but it didn't affect Lu Shen's sweet pet points at all. I give you 3 votes for support.
Hey, hey, didn't the heroine also dream about Brother Liuyi? Why didn't the hero say it when he asked?
I've seen it and fallen into the stars with him
The author buried a lot of foreshadowing in the first half of this novel, giving readers the feeling of a medium-length novel. This made the ending seem a bit rushed, but overall it was good.
It looks good, but there are too many typos
1. There are too many typos. 2. Except for the protagonist, there is no explanation at all. 3. I feel that the female supporting characters are just passers-by. The ending feels half-read and not complete at all. The first few chapters are still okay. The typos are not enough to describe them. There are too many. Isn't this book not checked before it is published?
It was pretty good at first, but later on some plot points were missed and not explained clearly. Even the ending is hasty. . .
There are many typos, many problematic sentences, the ending is too hasty, and many things are not explained clearly.
The male protagonist is too controlling