When he was young, because of a girl's words, he abandoned the military career prepared by his family and resolutely stepped onto the screen. When they meet again, they take every step to trap the girl who has long forgotten him into his arms.
One day after the marriage, Wen Qing pointed at Actor Lu with her waist and said angrily
"I've already deleted the kissing scene, why is this scandal still happening?" Lu Yi looked at the message clearly displayed on his phone with a smile: Shocked! Actor Lu's first on-screen kiss!
"Jealous?"
Wen Qing pursed her lips and turned around, not wanting to look at him. Lu Yi stepped forward and hugged her waist.
"I am very happy"
"Did you do it on purpose?"
Lu Yi laughed so hard that his chest trembled. He just wanted to see her jealous.
The biggest problem in the whole text is that there are too many typos, and they affect the perception. There are so many mistakes that I really can't read it. I have to think about what this place means, which is a bit annoying;
After watching the movie, I felt that the author's character creation was not particularly good. In the early stage, the female protagonist was quite gentle and strong, and as a screenwriter, she must have good logical thinking skills. After they got together, it was like losing her mind. Her personality completely changed and she started to look silly and sweet; the male protagonist is Although the actor, who comes from a superior family and has a cold personality, does not need flattery, he still needs to be well-mannered in the industry for so many years, because it is incomprehensible that he would sneer at others because of the heroine's lack of good looks, and he would go on strike from time to time.
It's hard to read the next twenty or thirty chapters, and the ending is a bit inexplicable. The author's writing style and plot structure need to be strengthened.
The heroine was a bit stupid in the later stage, but it didn't affect Lu Shen's sweet pet points at all. I give you 3 votes for support.
Hey, hey, didn't the heroine also dream about Brother Liuyi? Why didn't the hero say it when he asked?
I've seen it and fallen into the stars with him
The author buried a lot of foreshadowing in the first half of this novel, giving readers the feeling of a medium-length novel. This made the ending seem a bit rushed, but overall it was good.
It looks good, but there are too many typos
1. There are too many typos. 2. Except for the protagonist, there is no explanation at all. 3. I feel that the female supporting characters are just passers-by. The ending feels half-read and not complete at all. The first few chapters are still okay. The typos are not enough to describe them. There are too many. Isn't this book not checked before it is published?
It was pretty good at first, but later on some plot points were missed and not explained clearly. Even the ending is hasty. . .
There are many typos, many problematic sentences, the ending is too hasty, and many things are not explained clearly.
The biggest problem in the whole text is that there are too many typos, and they affect the perception. There are so many mistakes that I really can't read it. I have to think about what this place means, which is a bit annoying; After watching the movie, I felt that the author's character creation was not particularly good. In the early stage, the female protagonist was quite gentle and strong, and as a screenwriter, she must have good logical thinking skills. After they got together, it was like losing her mind. Her personality completely changed and she started to look silly and sweet; the male protagonist is Although the actor, who comes from a superior family and has a cold personality, does not need flattery, he still needs to be well-mannered in the industry for so many years, because it is incomprehensible that he would sneer at others because of the heroine's lack of good looks, and he would go on strike from time to time. It's hard to read the next twenty or thirty chapters, and the ending is a bit inexplicable. The author's writing style and plot structure need to be strengthened.
The heroine was a bit stupid in the later stage, but it didn't affect Lu Shen's sweet pet points at all. I give you 3 votes for support.
Hey, hey, didn't the heroine also dream about Brother Liuyi? Why didn't the hero say it when he asked?
I've seen it and fallen into the stars with him
The author buried a lot of foreshadowing in the first half of this novel, giving readers the feeling of a medium-length novel. This made the ending seem a bit rushed, but overall it was good.
It looks good, but there are too many typos
1. There are too many typos. 2. Except for the protagonist, there is no explanation at all. 3. I feel that the female supporting characters are just passers-by. The ending feels half-read and not complete at all. The first few chapters are still okay. The typos are not enough to describe them. There are too many. Isn't this book not checked before it is published?
It was pretty good at first, but later on some plot points were missed and not explained clearly. Even the ending is hasty. . .
There are many typos, many problematic sentences, the ending is too hasty, and many things are not explained clearly.
The male protagonist is too controlling