The Secret Bride: One Wife, One Bonus Baby

It's not good at all, it's appetizing. I haven't even finished writing the rest. I talked too much nonsense.

There is really too much nonsense, almost all useless words

It's a bit too much if not necessary.

I really couldn't stand it anymore. It was the first time I read a novel and I turned the pages at 8x speed. I could write two or three chapters in a row without writing any plot, just the words "Car and Wheel". It was very annoying. How did this score of 8 points come about? After reading Xiao Lingyue, I followed the author and started reading it after seeing good ratings. I was disappointed and gave up.

The author's writing style is good, but it feels completely divorced from the central idea. The whole book is like a character description, with the peripheral characters explained in detail. Even the child's disease is described in several chapters, which feels like popular science. The holes dug are not filled in. Instead, there are no clear negotiations. It is anticlimactic.

There is a lot of nonsense, and some places are seriously off-topic. I really can't stand it.

Writing is not easy at first, so I didn't want to comment, but I just couldn't bear it after reading chapter 150. There are too many things going on in my mind, it's so nonsense.

Where can I watch Xiao Lingyue?

Why did it end? They haven't yet explained who caused her to conceive the child, and they haven't yet explained who made her donate her eggs without her knowledge. How come it's such an ending?

There are too many psychological activities in this book, and it seems very verbose to reiterate some things. Moreover, according to the framework of writing at the beginning, it is not finished at all.