Lord of All Worlds

There are so many typos and omissions, it sucks

There are so many typos and omissions, it's really uncomfortable to look at.

The grammar is blunt, the writing is poor, and the logical thinking is not rigorous enough.

Overall good. The ending is too hasty

Not bad, but I can't understand it due to my age.

It's really cool. At the beginning, his father was a nine-star general-level Great Yuan Master. When he arrived at Baitiandao Academy, his father became the pinnacle Emperor-level Great Yuan Master.

I don't know if it looks good or not, but I don't have any negative comments.

To be honest, this is not a good book. After reading the first few chapters, I can't muster the interest to continue reading. A daughter in her twenties is written like a girl of a few years old. Wouldn't it be nice if you just write her as a girl of several years old? You have to set a character who is in her twenties and then a few years old.

Even women who are so awesome don't know how to use it.

Really, what is this book? Not to mention a daughter who comes from the future, and uses technology, this continent alone has problems. The strong are respected, and she even takes off her clothes and is soaked in a pig cage if a woman sees her. It's not good to hide women in the house. It's funny, a primary school student, right? In a place where there are many strong men in the Cultivation Continent, a top strong man hides a woman in his house, takes off his shirt and pants, and then is forced to invade a pig cage?