Pray for Longevity

Well written! The structure is clear, the text is also very particular, and interesting! I haven't discovered it before! Decided to follow and take a look. By the way, the first chapter is a bit long-winded, especially when introducing those sects. I think the sects can be discussed later in the narrative. Because the first chapter is about a sect and the ninth level of practice, the requirements for users are a bit higher.

That's not where. Seeing this, I gained momentum, but because of typos, my momentum dropped.

These two idioms... Are both derogatory terms... As moves, they feel so strange. It would be better if the tiger descends from the mountain or roars into the forest.

Ten draws, three monthly passes.

Shi Jiulang brings "War Star Record" to read~!

Huo Lie signed in and left his seal, signing the contract for Xianxia "Sword Roar", the same Xianxia but different stories, looking forward to great guidance! L

Exhale and the heaven and earth will move, raise your hands to shake the heavens and earth, make a great collection, and look forward to a return visit

"The Woman Next to the Richest Man" pays a visit to Da Da and supports the masterpiece!

Welcome back to visit, keep up the good work!

Although this novel has a strong immortality style, it is really good.