The Shadow Spirit Files

The sun was shining right at this time, but no one knew the story beneath the shadows. March 31st, Chapter 13 of Volume 3, scheduled to be updated.

After reading Chapter 15, I felt it was okay. The structure of this book is a bit like the original "Soul Ferry". If I had to make suggestions, I think there are two. One is that the characters in the story should be fleshed out. Personally, I think the first two stories are a bit superficial and there is no strong emotional conflict in them. The second is that if you want readers to have the desire to continue reading, you need a clue to link the story, a clue from shallow to deep, while continuing one story, leaving a suspense that will be revealed in the second story, one after another, which may be more interesting. The above only represents my personal subjective opinions.

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