The Venerable of Profound Heaven Medicine

The book "Yao Zun" has 800,000 words so far. I plan to go back and revise the text in the next two days. The plot will remain the same, but some details such as wording and dialogue will be modified. In fact, my editor did not recommend that I go back and revise the article. He said that there was nothing wrong with the plot. If I had the time, I might as well write more. This is actually true, but I decided to go back and revise the article because this is my first book and I want to write it as well as possible so that more people will like to read it. Moreover, because I am slow in typing and conceiving plots, sometimes I will get stuck, and I will be stuck there motionless. In this case, if you don't revise the text when it is stuck, maybe if you change it, it will stop getting stuck! The process of revising the article may cause some inconvenience to the original book friends. We also ask for your understanding. Tianji would like to thank everyone for your support along the way! Thanks!

Of the four books I am following, three have been discontinued.

The weight of the public opinion is well balanced, and the overall chapter is relaxed and relaxed, with a little tension and more humor (I really want to steal it QAQ) It's well segmented and comfortable to watch. A little mistake, no problem. The word "Yunying unmarried" is unfamiliar to me, so I checked it out and found that it has a derogatory meaning. It is used for older, unmarried, low-status women. The word used here is a bit... Ambiguous. I don't know if this is what I want to express. It is easy to be confused with the word "waiting in the boudoir". When Chu Xiaoyuan glared at Ye Yi, she thought "Ye Wangba, you wait!", If it were Chu Xiaoyuan staring at Ye Yi with "Ye Wangba, you wait" eyes, I would like it more! (Of course this is just a personal preference, for reference only) The part where the old pharmacist kicked the young apprentice away was so funny. There is a lot to learn from him. I look forward to more exciting follow-ups.

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