A Blade of One's Own

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Author, do you have no time? I really like this novel. Can I learn from it? I'm afraid I won't be able to see the ending, so I plan to write it myself. Don't worry, I won't copy it. I'm really sorry, I'm just a newbie, your meticulous skills are very good, I'm very bad at it, I hope you can understand.

Seeing it now, I really want to tell you, the author, that I like this novel of yours very much, I really like it. So I think I want to tell you, the author, some of my opinions. If it's not good, it's okay to laugh it off. The portrayal of this protagonist is very good. Personal opinion, I hope it will continue to be the same. The shaping of each person in the novel is also very good. I think that for a truly successful novel, it is not just the shaping of the protagonist, but the shaping of everyone in the entire novel. Everyone is portrayed with flesh and blood, making readers feel that everyone is the protagonist. This is not only the essence of a novel, but also a challenge to you, the author. In a martial arts novel like this, Jianghu emotions will definitely be reflected. This needs to be paid more attention to, and I hope the author will pay attention to the combat power in the novel. It must not be messy. After all, if the combat power in a martial arts novel is messed up, it will be difficult for the whole novel to go on. After all, it is only more than 200 chapters, and the protagonist still has a long way to go. I hope the author can be more precise. I hope the author will not rush for success and must be steady. I think this novel will be brilliant, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง. I will always support you

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In fact, I think the pace is a bit fast, the character description is not enough, and the emotional line progresses a little too fast.

The sword has been passed down through the ages with the industry, and the sword has split the world in troubled times. The spear moves vertically and horizontally like a dot of ink, and the stick sweeps down the demons in all directions. The steel whip that subdues demons shakes the five mountains, and the halberd is opened in two months and thousands of enemies are attacked. The ax sweeps the world like a whirlwind, and the hook cuts off all impermanent karma and eliminates it. From now on, no one is lucky enough in the world, and warriors from all over the world have entered the world. If I ask you who is the leader in the literary world, I will only see the author taking the laurels. An opening limerick, but the blogger laughed. I came here to visit you with my two works, "The Chaos of the World" and "The Sky of the Four Universes". I don't dare to ask for too much, I just hope that I can read my book and give some comments. If you feel that you are still motivated to read it, I will recommend it to your friends. I am very grateful for this.

The sword has been passed down through the ages with the industry, and the sword has split the world in troubled times. The spear moves vertically and horizontally like a dot of ink, and the stick sweeps down the demons in all directions. The steel whip that subdues demons shakes the five mountains, and the halberd is opened in two months and thousands of enemies are attacked. The ax sweeps the world like a whirlwind, and the hook cuts off all impermanent karma and eliminates it. From now on, no one is lucky enough in the world, and warriors from all over the world have entered the world. If I ask you who is the leader in the literary world, I will only see the author taking the laurels. An opening limerick, but the blogger laughed. I came here to visit you with my two works, "Four Universes in the Sky" and "The Chaos of the Universe". I don't dare to ask for too much, I just hope that I can read my book and give some comments. If you feel that you are still motivated to read it, I will recommend it to your friends. I am very grateful for this.

Nie Li has not seen the world yet, so it is inappropriate for him to be judged as a "good knife" by such a young and mature person. It can be better dealt with by spending more pen and ink.

I feel that the author's description of family love is slightly flawed and may be a bit rushed.

Remember, it is too harsh. It is not the tone of a father when he instructs his son. It sounds like a deceased master is warning future generations in a secret book.