The Ultimate Gift

The male protagonist is so promiscuous, so don't suddenly become a good person. What I don't like the most is the kind of guy who is inconsistent and duplicitous. Let's add one to the bookshelf first.

It was boring to watch, the dialogue was bland, and the personal speeches were all clouded and pretentious. I felt that the author was simply guilty of literary youth, but did not think that different characters should have different contexts. The main character's skills are too mysterious, making him look like a martial artist or an immortal, which is boring.

A grumbling adult wrote hundreds of pages but never finished them. It was written in the form of a rebellion at the beginning.

I've read about 10 chapters and I really can't stand it anymore.

The realm of breakthrough is confusing, the characters are unclear, and the protagonist's realm and various plots are very frustrating, making the readers uncomfortable.

Well, the writing is clean and neat, without any sloppy feeling. Clicking to the end is a good way to put pen to paper and add artistic conception for future encounters.

Body, feeling, image, Tao, Yuan, Hua, Xin, Ming, Tian

I wanted to write about the feeling in the snow, but I couldn't write it, which felt a bit like a cat and a tiger. The character descriptions in the first section are similar to those in the snow. Then in the book, the way northerners and southerners look at each other is based on regional discrimination and stereotypes.

It looked good at the beginning, but then it became more and more confusing. It was too long-winded, and I had to go into a long chapter about everything. It felt like I was just trying to make up for the word count!

More than what is lacking is more than what is lacking.