The Young Daoist of the Celestial Master's Mansion

It's okay, although the plot is a bit messy, but overall it's good

If you don't understand, really don't comment.

Did something happen to the author? Why did it suck?

Alas, it's a bit overwhelming. Overall it's quite good. Human nature is fully reflected. But overall, I think the front is better. The back part is basically unfinished and there is no so-called little Taoist priest and little fox getting married. The back part is all a bunch of history. People who read this book basically don't come to read the pair of history at the back. They come to see the little Taoist priest and the little fox get married. But without this, it makes people a little unbearable. You know, the back part. Alas, this sudden ending makes people really hard to evaluate.

The story begins with the little fox and the little Taoist priest. The little fox's deliberate approach and the senior brother's recklessness lead to the demise of the Song Dynasty. To put it bluntly, they are just chess pieces on the chessboard of high-ranking people.

I don't understand the ending, can anyone explain it to me? Are the little fox and the little Taoist priest together?

Are you from Butuo Longtan Town? Hahaha

There are always people who appreciate articles written with care, and even those who don't understand literature can see the hard work. After reading a few chapters, some details are a little touching. I have been reading novels for several years, and this is the only touching article. Come on, author!

There are just typos sometimes, I hope more attention will be paid to them

The game started well, but it got messy in the middle, and it was very confusing. I talked about things here and there, but the rest was okay. But the timeline was too messy, and the combat power was also messed up. One of them was seriously injured when he defeated ten monster commanders, and two of them couldn't defeat one. The story was also a bit messy.