The Immortal Trap Transforms into the Three Pure Ones
陷仙化三清
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 181k Words
- Subgenre
- Classical Xianxia
- Updated
- 8y ago
- Source
- Zongheng
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63Chapters
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1.7kClicks
16Favorites
2Fans
38Recommendations
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Author, maybe you should put aside the war and write a book
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It's not good to divide it into paragraphs, it's almost a big paragraph. Just like writing a composition, you need to control it reasonably, when to divide it into large paragraphs, and when to divide it into small paragraphs, that's it.
Comments from Chapter 23: Hua Yukui comes with his cavalry
Add 98# gasoline, keep up your efforts and become a god as soon as possible
The first chapter was okay, but this chapter has too much rhetoric, and the words are not easy to read, and the meaning is not clear enough; there is too little foreshadowing and it goes straight to the climax, which makes me a little confused.
"Star Dynasty" comes to visit
"Star Dynasty" comes to visit, give me some collections, return with the title of the book, let's work together! !!
The author's writing is pretty good. The writing style is good and the plot is pretty good. Come on, it's a pity that I just came to Zongheng and I don't have any recommendation votes.
It's very vividly written, wish it a great success!
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