Rebuilding the Great Song

Can the update be faster? Author, your book is much better than those illusory and random ones. At least it is not the kind of random fabrication and the readability is good. However, the update is too slow and makes people unbearable. If it is too slow, readers will lose.

First of all, your introduction is relatively average. Nothing particularly attractive. In general, in the introduction, it is best to show everyone the attractive, distinctive, or golden features of your book. Only when you have highlights will you attract others to see it. Tell me about your beginning. You started with ancient prose. But it uses a modern lyrics, which is more dramatic. What does it mean? That is to say, when you first explained the time of the Southern Song Dynasty and the location of Yangzhou, readers immediately entered the state of it. Readers will put themselves into the Southern Song Dynasty and Yangzhou City. Then the reader is an ancient person. Then suddenly came a modern lyric. In an instant, the reader was distracted and rushed to the present. The good sense of immersion was gone. That's not to say that modern things can't appear in time-travel stories. It's when you introduce modern culture. It must be ensured that the overall environment is still classical. It must be ensured that the reader will not be momentarily confused while reading. There are typos in the second paragraph, gasp. After you finish writing each piece of text, you must read it yourself. Be sure to double-check that there are no typos. There won't be any situation that will make the reader pause and unable to continue reading. In layman's terms, it means that the writing should be smooth. Smooth writing will completely immerse the reader into the character you describe. Any typos or wrong words will cause discomfort to the reader, and the reader will instantly become confused. It's hard to get back into the character you described. If there are typos, I won't point them out one by one here. As for the plot, the first few chapters are very bland, with no intense conflicts and no attractive cheats. It's basically a straight narrative. This makes it difficult for readers to want to continue reading. When writing online articles, you must pay special attention to it. You must clearly explain the characteristics of the book in the first three chapters, or it may be a golden finger, or it may be an attractive place to read. No more than five chapters at the latest. Otherwise, you won't be able to read it at the beginning. No matter how wonderful your writing is later, you may not be able to stick to that point. I see that in your previous introduction, you have always emphasized that the protagonist is a mortal. Yes, people can be ordinary, but what they do must not be ordinary. When writing in this area, you must plan in the outline how to show the conflict more intensely. It is best to do it one link after another, one conflict after another, and one climax after another. Make readers want to keep reading. There is no problem with the logic of thinking. There are still too many large paragraphs, and the use of periods and commas is still lacking. I actually discovered that you basically use commas in every paragraph. Except for exclamation points, you basically don't use periods in your sentences. This is very problematic. You still use commas when there is an obvious separation of meaning or incoherence. This forces the reader to read your entire paragraph in one sitting. This consumes a lot of energy and makes reading very tiring. I looked at about ten of them. To summarize a little bit. Generally speaking, the plot description is detailed and logically coherent. The writing is average and the narrative has no priorities. No emphasis on description. It's like laying out a running account, explaining everything in a hurry. It is recommended to design several representative scenes based on each person's personality characteristics, and highlight the protagonist and supporting characters and other details that can fully demonstrate their personality characteristics. Make all the characters in the book more three-dimensional. The personality is more distinct.

You have to persevere in whatever you do. Isn't it a pity that you can't finish a good book? I don't think you have to have the idea of ​​foolishness and loyalty. You are a time traveler. Why do you have to support the emperor? You can write below that the emperor abdicated the throne in the late Song Dynasty or married a princess and then ascended the throne. All in all, the writing is good, but the updates are too slow. Come on!

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