A Man of Means in the Late Ming

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This book is overall very good and I will keep following it. But there are a few places in the book that are not written well. In the first place, it is too abrupt for the male protagonist to jump from a dandy boy to a fifth-grade Jiangnan weaving company (the dandy boy is not shown how dandy he is), not to mention that he is too fat to be in a fat position. It is hard to imagine that because the male protagonist is so cool, unkind, suspicious, and cautious Shen won the trust and respect of Emperor Chongzhen in just one conversation. He suggested that there is a transition in the middle. It is best to first become a seventh-grade county magistrate or other local official, gain local governance experience and reputation, and then gain the favor of Emperor Chongzhen. This way the story will be smooth. The second place. Some places are not detailed enough. For example, the appearance and death of General Zhao Shujiao were written in a total of one paragraph, followed directly by the sentence "Zhao Shujiao died in battle." The image of the character was not established at all. The people and groups affected by this incident and the significance of this incident were not mentioned, making the story very dry and monotonous. I can't remember this kind of story even if I read it 10 times. 0 Points. The third place. The male protagonist is almost twenty years old and still has not married a wife, or the main plot surrounding his not marrying a wife has not been developed, nor has there been any explanation, making the plot a bit monotonous and boring. This is very unreasonable. The fourth place. When there was a disaster in Shaanxi, the actor only spent 50,000 taels of silver on disaster relief, but it actually cost 300,000 taels to redeem Liu Rushi! Do you think this data is reasonable? You must know that this is what the male protagonist forced himself to ask for under the premise that the old madam proposed 100,000 taels of silver. Is the male protagonist stupid or stupid? In my opinion, it would be better to reverse it. And what would happen if Emperor Chongzhen knew about this? Moreover, the book establishes a male protagonist who protects himself wisely, knows the emperor's temper, and has the goal of making a lot of money. Isn't it contradictory? And the rewards given by the protagonist to an army of 500 and 100 people are often twenty to thirty thousand taels, which is terrible. This is also a common problem in almost all historical novels, which cannot deal with the issue of money amount. Failure! The worst failure! The fifth place. The hero distributed Wei Zhongxian's inheritance to the ministers of the Manchu Dynasty. First of all, this is deceiving the emperor, or forming a group to deceive the emperor! Do you think this method is very clever? And can he hide it from Emperor Chongzhen? Besides, doesn't the emperor know that Wei Zhongxian is very rich? Then why wasn't there an investigation after his death? Could it be that we can't tell it from the mouths of Wei Zhongxian's family and confidants? The author has no description here, as if Emperor Chongzhen was completely unaware of this matter. This is not the case in history! Moreover, there are many ministers who regard the male protagonist as a thorn in their flesh. Not every minister is willing to accept the money. They will not go to Emperor Chongzhen to complain. Have you ever thought about this problem? The sixth place. The hero's helpers are really pitiful. After watching it for so long, there were only two people, Li Yan and Huang Degong. It was too monotonous. At the end when the hero was about to go north, there was no one to entrust with the affairs of Jiangnan. It was too far-fetched to leave it to Tang Kewang. The seventh place. The whole book does not reflect any advantages of a modern person. It is not that I want the author to make all kinds of inventions. In fact, I am very opposed to that. It is too fake. But at the very least, you must have a basic understanding of the famous figures in the late Ming Dynasty. Can you remain indifferent and indifferent if you know their character, abilities, and endings? Otherwise, it will be really difficult to help Chongzhen win back the game of history in that context. Too difficult too difficult In short, the writing is too simple in many places, many characters have not been established, and many clues have not been developed. But overall it's good. Come on! ! !

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Yesterday, I listened to your suggestion and made some modifications. The level of helplessness is limited. Let's just leave it like that. If there are distinguished guests coming to entertain us, if no one comes, we will just enjoy ourselves. You have to rise up, wait for you to become a god, come on!

I finally got through it, and I came here to see my old friend today.

It's been three hundred years, has your street-fighting posture gotten a little prettier?

I am an adult, and I am eighteen years old...

There have been too many trivial things in the past period, so I have time to come over today to read some wonderful works.

The knight came to study again. The details of BiNa's historical knowledge are handled very carefully.

Brother Bi Ne, as you are an important supporting character in my novel, I naturally want to support you. I have fully ordered it and will follow it and express my thoughts on the plot.