The Sword God’s Chronicles

In this chapter, I just want to complain about Kai's foul language.

Five Seconds of Night: Thank you brother for your persistent reading and evaluation. After all, this book is the first book with many shortcomings, many big pitfalls, and many rushed plots. However, I will slowly improve it. No matter what, I will continue to become stronger and improve my writing level like the protagonist in this book. So thank you for your opinions, I will learn from them. Of course, let me reveal that the new book is in the archives, so you can look forward to the layout of the next book. Let me tell you, it is a light novel type, about daily life with supernatural powers.

Xiaoye~Aren't you going to continue updating this book?

Wanze or Wanda? Yu's talent is weak. I think there is no obvious foreshadowing in the previous article, which makes it seem a bit abrupt here.

"Eye catching action" should say "barely" instead of "blurred" Chanliang's question about Leian's strengths and weaknesses was very abrupt, and suddenly serious but tasteless. It may be that the expressions and other descriptions were lacking, and the appropriate atmosphere was not created.

You Yao? Priest? It is easy to see here that Da Da wants to highlight the power above Can Liang, and the process is also very comfortable. Looking forward to the follow-up

Do you know that the power of men is to make girls shed their skin?

Canliang's appearance can be said to be the most embarrassing among the male protagonists... What about Yu Zhi not participating?

Canliang glanced at Guangzhi? It's a bit arrogant. "That strange sight turned out to be Guangzhi's sight" is a simple and natural description of Guangzhi's attention and learning.

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