Shanhe Sacrificial Knife

Fellow martial arts fellows, come to support

Every day's code is to persevere, come on, "Legend has a way" to visit, this book is full of grain, the more you read, the younger you become.

What a great introduction, finally meeting the hero 'Xiao Feng' again

The writing is smooth and the idea is clever. A masterpiece from a visit from a skinny guy who loves to drink

And here, Zong took a step forward, stood in front of him and whispered

For example, in this sentence, I think it would be better if it were written "Cang Huyun! Do you still remember me?"

For example, in this sentence, appearance and reality should be disconnected

Chapter 2 reads better than Chapter 1, but there are some problems with your sentence fragmentation. When the sentences are broken constantly, it makes the reading a bit uncomfortable.

For a first chapter, the chapter title is too ordinary.

No recommendations, no clicks, no comments, Zongheng is just a trap, ugh...