Holy Lord Tongtian

Better than the previous book, at least it has a beginning and an end! Like

I haven't finished two chapters. I can't stand it anymore. I quit.

This reason for becoming a traitor to avenge my sister-in-law is too far-fetched.

Why did you kill your senior brother to avenge your sister-in-law?

This one has no logic at all

The protagonist is not domineering enough and boasts too much

There are too many mistakes in the names of the characters in the book. Didn't the author correct them? Such low-level mistakes will only lower the reading grade of the novel.

Very good, it will be perfect if it is condensed a little more.

Why do you want to make the protagonist so poor? He doesn't take other people's storage rings when he kills people. He's already in the middle stage of innateness and he still doesn't have the ability to buy a sword.

The worst thing about this is that the rules above are so stupid. Why are you just robbing your own sect? It's difficult to start a sect like this by robbing one's own family, so why can't we go out and rob other sects? Fighting with other sects and opening a station to grab cultivation resources, you can just rob your own sect. What's going on? Are all the top sects idiots? Bored