Tongtian Talisman

I wish all my friends a happy Spring Festival and good luck in the Year of the Rat in 2020

More than a year has passed by in a hurry, and Pyrotechnics' first novel also came to an end at the end of 2018. "Tongtian Talisman" has many shortcomings. The pace is not fast, the plot lacks ups and downs, and there is not even a female protagonist (⊙▂⊙). Friends, please bear with me. "Tongtian Talisman" is a starting point, but it is by no means the end. The next novel will definitely improve these problems better. At the same time, I would like to thank all the friends who have accompanied me along the way: a Siyi, jnhflp, Guiyi Chong, Chong Buried in the Book, Yue Lacey, Linglong Suo, Huqiao Sanren, Xingkong Yanhen, He Feiteng, Moli Shenglingtian , Roma, The House with Cows, Endless Wild Wind, Away from the Upside Down Dreamland, The Ninth Knight OL, Ye Yeran, Jin Jinjinjin, The Heartless Actor, Yanjun Meixiang, Kuangyingphan (the above are listed in no particular order, hehe)

Look at these white clouds, they gather and disperse, they disperse and gather again. The separation and separation in life are like this again. ——Jin Yong·"The Legend of the Condor Heroes"

Come on dear friends… Good review! It's not easy. Record a book. I have a cold and a fever. It's hard to do it.

This is a novel about cultivating immortals for primary school students. Can you join the inner sect at the first level of Qi refining stage?

The author is still a student at school, right? There is a sect of cultivating immortals in the book, but it is actually a certain academy? Why didn't you say that the Chinese Academy of Sciences is recruiting students? !

Has the author passed the first grade?

The protagonist has a weak personality and is not decisive in killing the clan.

The writing is okay, but the academy flow looks disgusting, so I give it a bad review.

After seeing the comments from the great masters, I decided to give up and leave.