Sword to Kill Tianchen

The big book is great! By the way, I would like to implore you all to take a look at my book! Meng Xin is having a hard time living in Zongheng

Isn't it time to write properly now that there is so much water?

What a good book, such a hidden book

What kind of rubbish are you writing? Why don't you think about what the woman owes him? What does this do to women?

What Shulan wrote? In the previous life, he was the owner of Wanjian Villa and didn't learn the techniques of Wanjian Villa? If you haven't written anything, don't write nonsense.

It's a lot of nonsense. I can't stand the second chapter. There are thousands of words in one sentence. Am I here to explain it?

It's like reading an explanatory text, removing the plot and leaving only the functions. As a martial arts intensive, it should be fine.

The writing is a bit verbose

As long as such a strong person is reborn, his IQ will be negative after rebirth! Because no one who wrote the book knows what a superior person is, what a strong person is, and they don't even understand that the soul is the true self and the body is just a tool. Therefore, the strong people in the book are called ants, parents, and grandfathers after rebirth. If you think about it from another person's perspective, how can I say that, even if I am not a strong person! Those with normal brains can just return the karma to the physical body! As for those family affairs, it's none of your business, just finish your physical karma and leave immediately!

The early writing was mediocre, and I read about ten chapters. Since it is a rebirth story, the protagonist goes back in time with his memories and walks through it all over again. He doesn't even have the eyesight. He is being persecuted repeatedly, and he has to find a reason for himself not to kill him personally. He is not decisive at all.