Naruto Saves the Comic World

I really can't sympathize with him, and I made the protagonist look so cowardly.

I have learned a lot from the book, and came to visit with my contract for the classic fairy tale "Heavenly Sword Roar" to support me, get some fairy spirit, and look forward to a return visit for guidance! ! EM

I want to know how the turtle formed the seal

"The Supreme Creator" is a great work to be read. His writing style is outstanding and he will definitely become a god in one fell swoop. I would like to use this precious place to promote a new book and look forward to his corrections.

Iron Man or Iron Man?

The trumpet account of "Queen Wenyuan" is here to collect! The author is welcome to return for support!

I've read the first ten chapters. It's about 30,000 words, so I'm not going to lie about it. The writing is straightforward, and the plot seems to have a lot of twists and turns, but there's no sense of immersion. In other words, I can't feel the resonance of "I" as the protagonist. In fact, some of the embellishments and descriptions are a little awkward. Let's not mention the logic for now. This is a common problem for newcomers. It's confusing, including myself, and there's no logic. If you really want to write this book well, rather than use it to practice, I suggest you go to Feilu and read similar American comic fan fiction. I won't comment on whether the plot is good or bad. Others do have unique ideas in terms of sense of substitution. Well, the above is my complaint. I don't care if I take it seriously. I hope you can stick to it.

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Good article, keep it up ̮ վ

To be honest, even if you want to write about these experiences, don't make the protagonist so miserable