The Heavenly Showdown

After playing the game for several months and writing a book on a whim for a month, I finally thought of supporting it. But I've been busy recently and haven't had time to read, but I really like the big letters, at least I seem to write pretty well. I hope you don't give up.

I couldn't stand the middle part for a while. The protagonist, who is not very strong in fighting, is still fighting for a game world when she is terminally ill and about to die. But the more I look back, the more I want to know what the next story will be like. Some people will do whatever it takes to win, and some people will do anything for the bottom line. It's quite interesting. Positive energy; the ending is a bit rushed and it feels reasonable. I wonder if Jiang Ling will appear again in the Tianjue battlefield to say goodbye to his friends, and what will happen after returning to reality. In short, I think it is a really good book. It will not make you feel unsatisfied at a glance, nor will it be difficult to understand every word.

I originally wrote a reflection on the completion of this book, but I can't synchronize it here. Just say a few words. First of all, thank you to all my friends who have read this book. Because I am writing part-time, I cannot guarantee the update speed, and there are also some typos. Three times I lost my train of thought and couldn't start writing, and twice I thought my writing was too bad and wanted to give up. Although not many people read it, and few people commented, it still gave me a lot of motivation, thank you. The last three chapters are indeed dispensable, and some people complained that they were too watery. I don't want to make money from this book (mainly because I can't), and there's no need to overestimate the word count. I just want to write more and can't bear the ending. I want to write about the follow-up of each character. Boyue, Ji Ruhan, Nangong, Miriam... I want to write about them all, but they are not suitable. Some people complained that the protagonist was not strong enough and the plot was not exciting enough. I admit it. In fact, I personally hate Shuangwen subjectively. But now my thinking has changed. In the next book, I will write cool articles to cater to the market. It has already started and is expected to open in mid-September. See you in the next one.

(White stone tower is built on white stone, white stone is built on white tower, the tower collapses... I remember this is a line from Jia Ling, I think it is not serious but it is quite appropriate. It is coming to an end, the idea is difficult, and the writing is slow)

I took my fiancée home to see my parents during the May Day holiday. It was delayed for a few days. If anyone is waiting for an update, I apologize and try to update as much as possible in these two days.

Guys, I finally discovered some of the author's ideas. The guards of Wei Yeqiu, the son of the Wei family, are called Dongfeng, Lisuo, Jixuan, Shanmeng, and Jinshu. These are all from the song "Chai Tou Feng" in the Song Dynasty. I always thought it was very familiar, and now I finally discovered that The Hairpin Head Phoenix is ​​the culmination of the love story between Lu You and Tang Wan. The author has written this book so well, the plot is well designed, the story is well designed, and the details in it are even better.

The protagonist is a holy mother who repays evil with kindness. His enemies are so mean to him, but he still has to save him and let Jesus come down. The protagonist goes up and ties him up.

I feel that there is nothing wrong with the writing, the subject matter is very novel, and it is not the kind of mindless novel. The protagonist is an ordinary person with flesh and blood and has his own confusion. The writing itself is not for invincibility at the end, but more like a biography that is not gorgeous. It may not be in line with the tastes that most readers are used to, but it is still a good work for newcomers.

This is the matching mechanism. . It's okay if you don't do the standings. . The world's closed beta game? In every copy, the protagonist is on the bright side, and every time the protagonist is weak in the early stage or always weak. . The combat power of the enemy and our players is also one-sided. . I understand that the author gives the protagonist strength. . But you still have to create a standings. . I've never seen someone tear themselves down like this. .

Okay, there is no absolutely decent villain here, and the IQs of the main and supporting characters are all online and they are not virgins. The only thing that may not be good is that the dialogue may be too lengthy. It would be better if the length of the dialogue could be shortened while ensuring the plot experience.