The Lord’s Roar

Fortunately, there is some humor in the front

After reading it, the whole book is shocking and has echoes of World of Warcraft. Both the front and middle are good. It is passionate, funny, and touching to make you cry a little bit. However, the ending is too hasty. I would give it 60 points out of 100. If the ending is written well and does not imitate Beast Blood and writes my own style, I can give it 90 points.

Everything about the book is good, but the narration is a bit disgusting. The plot progresses slowly because there are too many narrations. I can't write much dialogue in a chapter and it's all narration.

The content is almost the same as that of Nasha Feishuo.

Is the magician illiterate? The Grand Duke of the Kingdom is illiterate? Now even a time-traveling mercenary doesn't even remember the gunpowder recipe? If this world can be tolerated without saltpeter, are you saying that you don't remember the gunpowder formula? Could you please give the author a little bit of basic logic?

I saw a bunch of gringo names, but I didn't remember them. They were all in such a mess.

The writing of the article is okay, but the plot design is too flawed, and the reference to the holy mountain of the Holy See is just an own goal in the end. The content is too contrived, and it has a deliberately blunt feeling. It feels like everyone is being treated as a fool, and the desire to read is completely lost.

Why is there only standard sound... I can't listen to it. The sound is so awful.

It would be more appropriate if I carried a shrine on my back.

Salute to the beast blood! Well written