The Great Zhou Saint

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Lovelorn The author is very sad and hopes for support! , Wuwuwu, let me cry for a while!

The deputy moderator of the great village chief from another world came to study, and it felt very interesting! Collected, welcome to recycle to support the village chief

I read five chapters of this book without skipping a beat, and then I discovered a lot of missing points. First, the pace is slow. You can't tell what the main plot is from the first few chapters. Maybe you want to express some foreshadowing or something noble, but you are just a newcomer, and no one will care about your foreshadowing and words. I just felt very bored after reading the first five chapters, and I will not read the rest at all. This is why there are so few collections of this book. Second, it's good to have gorgeous words, but if it's too gorgeous, it becomes pretentious and boring. Think about it, people reading your book will feel like junior high school students reading classical Chinese. Who will read it? The book is not bad, but the beginning should be revised. It is best to start the third chapter directly, leaving suspense, and just skip the first two chapters.

Today I talked about general things, and then I will talk about some specific plot issues, such as the relationship between Su Xie and Su Sansi, Su Ruofang's thoughts, etc.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I still don't understand why Pigfoot's family sent someone to kill him, just because he disobeyed discipline? Even if this is a pit rather than a BUG, ​​but the pig's feet don't look strange at all, shouldn't there be some explanation? Many places are far-fetched, and the author needs to pay more attention to normal logic while expressing his own ideas.

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The masterpiece has been collected. Thank you for your support. Come on, buddy.

This chapter was originally about He Qingshan's story, but after much thought, I decided to make it a main story in the Heaven Realm. Well, I know I'm talking to ghosts!