Homeward Bound

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The plot jumps too fast and makes me speechless

Do you want to use absurd writing techniques, or are you just writing randomly? Although the randomness is good, the stories are incoherent. Trying to use the unusual to highlight the unusual is actually neglecting the basics. The story is the core of the novel.

A half-baked reason like this is the worst arrangement. Either just describe the expression and leave suspense for later, or give a reasonable reason, something specious is not acceptable.

Wrong post, please repost a chapter.

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The exam is over, I feel relaxed

Hit, hit, hit~

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There is another exam next week, and I have been feeling very tired lately. . . . . .