Adventure King of the Movie World

To be honest, yours is the first book I have reviewed. I have read many books but have never reviewed them before. Today, I don't want to endure it anymore. As a newbie, you have unclear divisions of strength and understandable emotional lines. But after you see that you have technology and you can build an ultra-modern mobile phone with just a few parts, I don't understand. You can just write whatever you want, and that's the end of it? All in all, it is an article written by junior high school students and read by elementary school students.

There are so many typos! ! Oh My God!

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Too many typos

The first chapter is full of flaws...

There are so many typos and missing words. Could you, the author, please pay attention to them?

Lu Geunke brought "Nine Turns of Civets" to visit Da Da Da's masterpiece. I hope Da Da Da works with great writing skills and can become a god as soon as possible!

Who believes this? This girl is too fair.

What is written is too illogical. For example, it is not clear at all about soul reincarnation and why it was reincarnated as Ruoling. Another example is space technology. Is it clear what it does? There is also mobile phone manufacturing technology. I never expected that it is really just manufacturing technology, chip design, motherboard design, material production, etc., None of it. In the author's mind, a mobile phone that is hundreds of years ahead can actually be produced with current equipment, and it is actually a It took me a while to make it, and it actually comes with a system wizard. I'm almost vomiting. Where did your system come from? Is it programmed? Sao Nian, don't tell me that the mobile phone manufacturing technology has transferred the system source code to your brain. Even if you can understand the code, can you? Shouldn't skills like programming proficiency be inculcated first? Are any business contracts that sloppy? You can write it briefly. For example, you said that the company was acquired half a month later, but it was written as if you were giving out a red envelope. It turned out that it would cost 500 million to solve the strange incident. Isn't that stupid? It costs 500 million to buy a mobile phone manufacturing plant. Isn't it stupid? A transfer contract does not require a lawyer or negotiation. It can be taken out in minutes. After it is taken out, you can let others make the decision without even looking at it. Isn't it stupid? After signing the contract, I transferred money online on the spot. When did China Bank Card become so powerful that it can transfer 500 million online? The balance can actually be seen by others when making online transfers. You can't pretend like this. Do you have any privacy? The big boss doesn't know that you can't read other people's bank card information casually. Isn't that stupid? Let's not talk about the plot or the writing style. Just the understanding of things is at the junior high school level, and the writing is like a child playing house.