The Dragon of the Three Kingdoms Soaring over the Four Seas

Assassin Qin with Jing KeVisit

The writing is wonderful and has been collected. I will visit the masterpiece frequently. Welcome to return and learn from each other!

I'm sorry if it sounds harsh: I'm basically paying attention to the Zongheng Three Kingdoms novels, which are still being updated. I just pay attention to the results of these books, but I don't read much about the content. I found that although your novels have been put on the shelves, there are only a few dozen collections. The rest of the data is also average. But even so, you still persevere, which I admire very much. In a novel, grades are not important, but perseverance to the end is precious. However, I still want to say that today I briefly read your content. It feels... Not very good. The first is the title and introduction of the book. This one is quite good. The introduction says that your protagonist will start his career overseas. This is relatively new among Three Kingdoms novels. But when I clicked in and looked at the content, I was disappointed. The first chapter is pretty good, quite impressive. Chapter 2 It is acceptable to use seeds as a golden finger to start a business. Starting from the third chapter, it becomes a bit cheesy. Like papermaking, using prophets to make friends with powerful people who have not yet made their fortunes is too vulgar and will make those old bookworms feel tired. I feel that it's not that you can't write clichéd plots, it's just that you have to put them later. If readers feel clichéd from the beginning, the book's performance will naturally be difficult to improve. After that comes a series of chapters. I don't know if it's because I read it too quickly or for some reason, but I always feel that your plot is a bit... Streamlined. You don't write in detail where you should, and many places are just passed over. The plot of the novel needs to highlight key points, and some key scenes should be written in detail from time to time to make it exciting. For example, if you write the first chapter like this, it's pretty good, but by the end, this feeling is gone... I didn't read the following content because I was busy. I apologize if the comments are biased. However, the early content of the novel is really important. If the early stage is not exciting enough, readers will not read the rest.

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Although you have only published a small amount of content in this book, it can already be seen that the writing style is good. Come on, there's potential. God rewards hard work, persistence is victory. The newcomer came to visit with "Xian Dao Enron", hoping to collect it and return for a return visit. I am a person who likes to make friends. You are welcome to be a guest at my place. We will visit each other more often and communicate more in the future.

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