Magic NPC in Online Games

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I recommend a book written by my brother, "Legend of Yunmeng: Douluo", which is very well written.

1. The story is relatively novel and worth reading. 2. Sometimes the writing is unclear and the jumps are too fast and too frequent. You understand the author but the reader is confused. 3. The background is not clearly explained. At first I thought it was a modern technological society. As I wrote, I felt that the world of Xianxia had developed high technology. 4. Please clarify the difference between pervert and lolicon first. 5. When the author digs a hole, please first think about how to fill it. The hole is not others but your work. Conclusion: There are many books to read, but don't take them seriously if you have nothing to do. If you are serious, don't read them. So by episode 170, I couldn't watch it anymore.

I forgot about it in the article just now, so I'll just mention it here. I wish everyone a lot of happiness and good spirits in the new year.

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It feels like something is going to happen in Novice Village, such as a monster attacking the city. Why should I add the premise that the teleportation array has not been destroyed?

The text is smooth and mellow, the plot has ups and downs, the characters are vivid and vivid, a rare work, a novel idea, keep working hard, and the scenery will come to you.

The content and plot are not very rich, there is too much space to introduce the system, and the plot lacks coherence. I hope to add more storylines and not pay too much attention to the game settings. In addition, I don't understand the parts where the mission is announced and rewards are given to Yi Shuihan. It may be that the author did not express what he wanted to express. I hope the author works hard! Come on!