Ling Tian, who was born with a body of chaos, was unable to practice the Xuantian Continent's martial arts normally. Later, he learned that if the body of chaos could not be suppressed, his life would be in danger. By chance, he obtained the heaven-defying techniques, "Chaos Defying Heaven Technique" and "Nine Heavens Immortal King Art", and embarked on the path of cultivation in order to survive. Later, in order to resurrect his loved ones, he pursued the method of the great road...
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I just saw on the website that the author said that some readers reported that there were too many dialogues and the pace seemed too fast. I think that adding some description of the environment or psychology before the dialogue, and then describing the actions and expressions in the middle of the dialogue, if there are these descriptions, a lot of dialogue can be saved.
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Although the beginning is cliche, the writing is not bad, and it is already very good for a newcomer. Hope it gives us more excitement. I hope the author will make fewer typos.
Come on!
Persistence is victory✌
Da Li, come and take a look. I have never used the mobile APP and don't know what it's like to sign in. Come on, in short, come on for everything. *My collection is increasing every day. I have a lot of clicks. Readers like it. All the best . The readers are also very cute. Ha ha.
Very good
Come on ↖(^ω^)↗, the next god is you.
A drop in the ocean, click to make a difference, click to support! Top of the list in high school!
Change the status immediately and request to be added to the new book list
My book has also had a bumpy journey. I signed a contract for 30,000 words. During the long holiday in October, the contract status has not changed until now. But it will be changed soon. This week is still in the new book period. I hope you will click to collect it and support it! Thanks
A little suggestion
I just saw on the website that the author said that some readers reported that there were too many dialogues and the pace seemed too fast. I think that adding some description of the environment or psychology before the dialogue, and then describing the actions and expressions in the middle of the dialogue, if there are these descriptions, a lot of dialogue can be saved. Support the author!
The drops of water gather together and eventually become the ocean! Read two chapters every day and add a click to help you become a god!
. .
Can it be updated faster?
Fat paper return visit
The masterpiece has been collected, supported by recommendation votes, and we will work together.