Dream Sword, Rivers and Lakes

Dear author, if you hug a pillar during a typhoon, you don't have to worry about it being blown away! Ah ha ha ha!

Z Haha, don't be afraid when the typhoon comes, just have a calm mind in your heart,,,

There is a ghost tonight, red dress, need to lift the red cover

Wow, I saw the trench, I caught it and slapped it~

Come on, there will be no miracles if you don't persist!

Commenting objectively, I think it is too unstable. This chapter is actually pretty good. Keep up the good work. I think it would be better to highlight the conflicts between Pig's Feet and other people at the same time, instead of slowly introducing them like this. From the first chapter, the life experience of the protagonist* and the subsequent plot and foreshadowing are described. Xiaoxiao has also become a highlight. However, I still don't understand why Xiaoxiao left at the end of the first volume. Couldn't there be a woman by Xiao Ran's side who would stay with him from beginning to end? Wang Xuanzi's death was a bit unfortunate. The description you gave him was a bit lacking, and the story of Little Senior Brother Knowing Destiny in One Step was also a bit lacking, but overall it's still good. It can be seen that you are writing with your heart, keep up the good work and keep writing. The second volume has begun, and I hope you can write better and better. Every novice starts from scratch, waiting for you to finish!