The Road to Success

Although the writing is so good, it is not very popular. I think there are some reasons as follows. . 1. The martial arts system in the book. The system of this book is Warrior, Martial Master, Zhoutian Realm, Mysterious Realm, etc. It seems that it is also divided into martial arts cultivation and art cultivation. But judging from the fact that I spent two days reading these more than 100 chapters... This system is not successful. The boundaries between levels are blurred... Killing enemies beyond levels is common... I think the author's first book is best not to create his own system... Since it is a fairy tale and cultivation novel, it is better to stick to the more familiar Golden Elixir and Nascent Soul system. Because people are more receptive, the difference in strength between levels is also very clear. The first book is a self-created system, which often makes people hard to understand... Especially the chapter about the protagonist's Nirvana and rebirth. I read the chapters twice and still couldn't understand them. Moreover, in the self-built system, it is difficult to control the upgrade rhythm of the protagonist and supporting characters... I think the protagonist upgrades too fast... It is similar to Long Aotian in those cool articles... I recommend this book here. You can refer to it... [Quest for the Immortal Path] at a certain point. This book is very old. It was finished in 2009, but the rhythm in it is very good... After all these years, there are still a lot of fans looking forward to the Second Immortal Path in the forum. . Two heroines Judging from the past 100 chapters, is the heroine sending peace to you? If so, I think the relationship is progressing a little too fast. The description of "Send Peace" is still very successful, but the emotional line develops so quickly that it loses its charm. Most of the people who watch Xiuzhen are men... Men are naturally philandering... Although I personally don't like studs, and I prefer dedicated ones. But the heroine was determined not long after the opening scene. The whole book lost room for imagination in terms of the heroine. Here I recommend the book "Squid's [The Lord of One Life]", also known as "The Monk of One Life"… The description of the female protagonist and supporting characters in it is very good. After reading so many books, I still like the witch Gu Xiaosang [the author borrowed from Wanwan in The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty] and the supporting actress Snacks... What's more, many books nowadays are equally attractive without female protagonists... As long as the supporting characters are well described. . 3. Grasp the Rhythm This point was mentioned in the first article, but let's focus on it... The most attractive thing about cultivation novels, apart from the plot, is leveling up to fight monsters... This is a bit straightforward, but it is true. What's the point if the protagonist is so great as soon as he comes out? He's the best in the world not long after the beginning of the book. What's left to imagine? [I'm not talking about this book.. I'm just talking about some common mistakes in cool writing] In fact, watching the protagonist grow up step by step is the selling point of the novel about cultivation... In the later stage, when NB coaxes him, it is already the end... If the parameters of the protagonist are set too high right from the start, it will be really meaningless... It is found that 95 out of 100 books are all good stories, and those five books are the ones that really go from weak to strong step by step. Is it easier to stand out among 95 books or among those five? In fact, after reading the names and introductions of some books, I threw them away... Because there were too many interesting articles and now everyone is tired of them. Those who can write books do so to make readers happy. But some people write books just for their own pleasure... This is the origin of those happy articles. Of course, I didn't say that this book... It's not a good book. But the protagonist's starting point in the first hundred or so chapters is too high. This aspect is really uninteresting. . I found several websites and I'm chasing two books: The Mysterious Lord of the Squid and The Sword. The pacing of this book is very good, but I still like Jianlai more. . The author's writing style is very good. I have only read more than a hundred chapters of this book. In fact, I think it is a rare good book. I don't want the author to lose the motivation to create when he has such good writing skills. In fact, if this book was the third or fourth written by the author, its popularity would certainly not be low. The reason is the above. As the first book, if it is written too deeply, it is not surprising that sometimes it is too high-spirited... You should first write two mainstream books on cultivation, accumulate some fans, and then create your own system. This way more people will read it. If I hadn't run out of books to read, I might have given up on the chapters of Nirvana and Rebirth... Um, I can't speak very well, but I still hope it will be helpful to the author by writing so much. I hope to read the author's new book soon... I don't like this heroine very much Never give up. You see, Squid is number one at a certain point right now, but his previous books were also very miserable.

I really like these recent chapters, they are bland and seem very comfortable, although they are probably just the tranquility before the storm is about to come. Besides, I really like Xie Yundu! ! !

Haven't seen you for a long time. The past year has been chaotic and chaotic. My physical and mental condition was not good. I tried several times to adjust myself but failed. I started living in a new city last month and used my new job to force myself to have a regular schedule. I cut my hair short, started going to the gym, and set aside an hour a week to learn singing or musical instruments, review for exams, and finally started writing Chapter 11, which I had been missing for a long time. You have to cheer up and continue to live a good life. There are still many things to do.

Just finished watching it. A lot of information, enjoyable to read

I still haven't written what I was planning to post together, but ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! … Writing these chapters was so painful that I almost killed myself. I can't do it anymore. I have to review. I have to do something else.

I declare that Ji Mu is the first yandere in this game so far! An irresponsible guess about the plot: Could it be that Ji Mu killed his father and ran out of the house, escaped from Wuzong, learned that the Feng clan had held a soul summoning ceremony for Qiming, and then rushed to the Fengwu Abyss, but Duotou met Xie Yundu with the little Phoenix. If this is really the case, I can only say: Xie Yundu, take the child and run! ! !

Exciting! ... Ji Mu is so pitiful! There is such a father!

To be continued

When I wrote this chapter, I wanted to create a ghostly and quiet tone similar to that seen in Hayao Miyazaki's anime scenes. When I was writing it, I felt extremely dissatisfied and wanted to slap myself to death. But I suddenly re-read it today and it turned out to be pretty good. It's considered a passing grade.

It was my final season recently, and I had a lot of deadlines to meet. It would be fine if it was just like this, but because those of us in the UK are preparing to start fleeing back to the country, we have recently been preparing for [catching up on tasks in advance] [grabbing air tickets] [consulting with school tutors] [changing research plans] [moving luggage back to the country in advance] and [preparing things for the quarantine point back home]. The update time is not fixed, I'm sorry. Wish me safe return to the isolation point in my hometown