The Eternal Divine Emperor

The storyline is smooth and not contrived, I like it. However, there are also wrong names, typos, mispronunciations, etc. That need to be improved.

The plot is okay, the sentences are basically fluent, but there are a lot of typos. The protagonist's name, level, etc. Are often wrong. But you can still take a look.

Can. It's just that there's no point in hiding your cultivation. And killing people is hard. The ink is not finished. I keep forgetting things about picking up storage rings. And they don't cultivate their own people. He always likes to show off and cause trouble by himself.

Except for the ending being a bit rushed, everything else was fine