The Collapse of Renegade Immortal, Defying the Dao

This novel is very well written. I have never seen it written so vividly. The plot is very detailed. It focuses on one word "water".

It's so long-winded and full of nonsense. I couldn't stand it after reading more than ten chapters. I don't dare to think about the rest.

There are so many things, I am completely speechless.

This pig's trotters mutilate themselves every time they lose in a fight, and they perform surgeries on themselves and dig them out in various ways? I was stunned. I was dumbfounded when the caesarean section was performed. I covered my ears when the chicken was being pulled!

Anyone who has read it, please tell me, is there no time travel, reincarnation, rebirth or the like here, but inheritance?

There are too many emotions to express. I have to express my emotions when I fight with someone. I have to express my emotions when I encounter an opportunity. I could have written the plot in two chapters, but it's twenty chapters and I still haven't finished it.

I want to know why warriors and immortals can't practice together.

Very boring writing, I like to add adjectives

It's fine. It's okay. The key word is "existence" and there are at least five or six of it in one paragraph. Now that I hear the word "existence", I want to punch someone. Brother, I still think your story design is okay. Really, I just want you to check it and think about it next time and don't keep repeating these two words. I'm tired of listening to it. . [Cry]

I'm crazy for Bi, I'm dead for Bi, I'm still ideal even if my life is gone, did you have a cerebral thrombosis all over your body?