From Demon to Immortal

Brother Lu Storytelling: He tricked me into coming in. I reported him. If I'm not happy, go find him on Douyin.

How can I put it, the writing is average, although overall it is good, but a closer look always gives people a very strange feeling. The description of the big scenes is not shocking enough, and the details are not careful enough. The behavior of the male protagonist is also a bit strange. The previous article said that he would not save it, but he saved it because of a woman (could it be said that the life of his father and General Ding'an is not important). Although the male protagonist is said to be running around in various caves, it feels like the world view is never big enough, and the behavior of the supporting characters is also incomprehensible. For example: Suzaku is jealous because her master said that the male protagonist's moral conduct can be compared with hers? Are you kidding me? No matter how unbearable she is, she will never reach this point. She is the top disciple of a top sect. Will she care about this kind of thing? Or is it because her master has never taught her what it means to be courteous, benevolent, and humble? Do you think that a top sect is inferior to an ordinary dynasty? I'm tired, come on, author, the road is still long and you shouldn't stop here.

Nonsense. Literature advises everyone to quit.

It's so long-winded that I feel like I'm just trying to make up the word count.

Why is it only Chapter 200 that the main character is gone and all are supporting characters?

The abandoned prince mistakenly fell into the devil's path and became a descendant of the ancestor of the devil's sect. The catastrophe of heaven and earth came. He held the world-destroying demon sword and walked between good and evil, sweeping the world with the power of the Nine Netherworld!

The male protagonist is too weird, I can't stand it

I feel like it's okay. It's very nice when it's finished. It's just a bit short and the plot is subpar.

Chapter 11 Battle of Dharma: The person holding the pen must apply the Dharma! Isn't this nonsense?

The writing is simply filled with text, and half of it is made up of supporting characters.