The Undying Dragon Body

Mobai boss, the writing is really good, I can learn from it hehe

Koolk j

To be honest, the beginning of this book is quite discouraging. 1. In Chapter 6, Sword and Stone, the author uses some anthropomorphic techniques on the stone. This writing method is acceptable, but what makes people feel uncomfortable and even disgusting is the description of the protagonist's operation: "The protagonist gently strokes the scars on the sword and stone, like stroking his wife." There are also various emotions of pity, holding the grass, it is really disgusting! 2. Around Chapter 14, the protagonist is ordered to exterminate the bandits. The protagonist, who was originally lurking, was found to have a disordered aura after seeing the woman in white! This is acceptable even if it is an accident! However, during the fight, the protagonist was still distracted after seeing the woman in white? Is this a fucking staff? No one else charmed him yet he kept losing consciousness over and over again? He even reached out to lift someone else's veil and was beaten! In the end, others rescued the protagonist who was beaten like a dog by the gangsters. Unexpectedly, the protagonist was so ungrateful that he even went so far as to challenge the woman in white who rescued him, saying that she had humiliated him? And he threatened to seek justice from her when his cultivation level improved? Oh my god (I have never seen such a shameless white-eyed wolf)! ... This damn benign white-eyed wolf, if the protagonist hadn't been so stupid and wanted to lift someone else's veil, would others have beaten him? If the woman in white hadn't been on the right side and didn't kill innocent people indiscriminately, this kind of person would have died dozens of times. 3. After reading the first dozen chapters, it is really difficult to get over this hurdle and it is difficult to continue reading...

I can't stand watching Chapter 15... It's nothing.

I can't walk when I see a woman. Licking a dog is boring. Don't look at the beauty.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing thirty-five pictures, the author haha

What kind of plot is this? The protagonist has no brains when he sees a beautiful woman. I'm convinced.

Immortal Dragon 2: The Union of Worlds

Can I write the second season of Immortal Dragon Body?

Okay, ok, worth recommending