Xuanyuan Magic

There are many typos and grammatical errors. When I first read the first three chapters, there were no typos or grammatical errors, and the punctuation marks were also used correctly. Later on, not only did typos and grammatical errors appear frequently, but punctuation marks were also used incorrectly. I'm a bit stuck on the plot. More than a hundred chapters have passed, and I'm still chattering about the Guiyuan realm.

The author wrote all his cowardice and nagging into the character of Pig's Foot. It's extremely disgusting.

It's too tedious. He is not an ordinary casual cultivator, but he always wants to enter the sword palace. Later, he becomes someone else's guard for no reason. In the previous chapter, he said that sword cultivators should rather break than bend, but in the next chapter, he is afraid of trouble and can only join the palace as a personal guard. In the front, he can fight to the death with those two steps higher than him, but in the back, he has to avoid anyone who is a step higher than him. It's too ridiculous.

His language is non-verbal, and he likes to write omitted sentence patterns. There are only a few sentences with complete subject, predicate and object in the whole chapter, which is puzzling.

What makes me speechless is watching, you summoned Changshan Zhao Zilong to me to open Wushuang. I am really speechless. When writing novels, I am most afraid of intruders and it is very fragmented.

It's so watery that I cut off a thousand words per chapter before I can read it. Each page has one to two hundred words, and only half of the words are substantive content.

The style category is a great competition, but the difference is not even a little bit different. Other mortals would dare to kill the disciples of the rich clan to seize the opportunity. Killing people here depends on the background, looking forward and backward, being timid, crossing two common problems, parents worshiping heaven and acting like actors, recognizing parents and worshiping ancestors for eighteen generations, stitching together from time to time, and Changshan Zhao Zilong makes it up, either righteous or evil, hypocrites are the most disgusting, using tens of thousands of mortals as pawns, what if your mother and the whole world choose, this kind of writing is the most disgusting

The author is really a genius for being able to write such a plot.

A demon who controls his own pigtails can actually say that the Holy Mother is the Holy Mother. It's just a piece of cake.

The author has a fatal flaw in writing a book: low martial arts and chanting curses! I have to recite mantras to cultivate immortality. I am really drunk! I had to recite a spell during the battle, and I had already been killed by someone with a sword. The author is suitable for writing martial arts because he has written all the immortal heroes as martial arts