The Struggle for the Immortal Path

After reading the first volume, I can no longer read the second volume. The writing and story are very good, but there is a big problem with the concept. The protagonist makes a big wish to be "free and free", then turns around and puts a collar on himself and sells him to a wealthy family as a slave. There are too many chapters where the protagonist solves problems for the young master and relieves his boredom. This is just a f**king novel about worldly affairs. Is it appropriate for you to put on a cultivation shell?

There's no reason why I didn't know about the existence of the protagonist for so long.

In fact, in Taoist practice, above the saints are immortals and perfect people, and the ultimate goal is real people. Therefore, Taoist practice is called cultivation.

I can't help but complain after reading this chapter. It's acceptable for your world of cultivation to violate the laws of physics, but if you have random intercourse between different species and can produce offspring, doesn't it seem too ignorant? I really can't stand whether your basic knowledge reserve is enough for you to write a novel. 눈_눈

Why doesn't Xu just join other factions?

This section is so poor. Just let it go. It's very childish to coax a child.

It's very illogical. Horse thieves want to live and survive. It's understandable to rob food and stuff. It's normal to kill people when they resist. They slaughter villages at every turn. Are they tired of living?

This is the true meaning of lying.

Recommended book, prehistoric: I am Yang Jian, burying the saints of the past

In the chapter about persuading people to quit, the head of the family is written with no grace and his IQ is worrying. Isn't it a normal outcome for a slave to kidnap his master and be killed in that era? Must force the Holy Mother.