Tribulation

After reading the beginning, within ten chapters, I couldn't start. Generally speaking, the beginning of a book is very attractive and fascinating, and I hope for the next chapter. This book goes in the opposite direction. The beginning is tepid, rambles on, and doesn't say anything for a long time. My patience is really limited, so I won't stay any longer! Walk slowly without sending [dog head]

Not recommended, serious water injection. After reading this book, I threw away all the works by this author on my bookshelf. The flaws in the work are obvious: 1. Plot injection: A. The rules are set very randomly, and the logic is often inconsistent; B. The author does not seem to have the concept of dramatic conflict, and there is a problem with the refining ability. The writing is average, and the irrelevant points are endless, but the climax is brushed off - the result is that the normal pleasure of reading is castrated, and the work is not divided into priorities, and the narrative is straightforward. C. This makes the theme of the work vague. After 600 chapters, I don't even know what to say, let alone values. 2. Characters are watered down: The image is so disappointing that every time the protagonist is unlucky, people applaud. The powerful protagonist is forcibly demoted and reduced in intelligence, and the villain who is so weak that he is not worth mentioning is forcibly empowered again and again - it is not impossible, but there must be a convincing reason. The author has no awareness of this at all. He pulls onions from dry land and reads it just to fill it with water. He can write whatever he wants. Why doesn't he write 6000 chapters? ! As I read it, I was constantly being forcibly enlightened, and it was a mess. 3. Text: It is fairly fluent, which is the only advantage. However, due to the above series of problems, the text is very wordy and garrulous. There are also many typos and the writing is very casual. These problems existed when I read the previous book "Chang'an Floating Demon Record", but this one is even more serious. It can be seen that these problems of the author are structural flaws and are difficult to improve. This author is at this level. There are so many good works online, it's not worth wasting your time here.

I feel that Ah Cha's "Dongdu Yin" is getting better and better as it is written, and the plot becomes more and more exciting towards the end. When I first read it, it seemed a bit unclear because some of the background could not be described first, especially the vague part about Yu Li being rescued by the bamboo demon, and the part where Yu Xie appeared, which was quite abrupt, but it gradually got better.

Well, when modern people appear, I suddenly have no mood to continue reading.