Cultivating Immortality at One Hundred: Starting with the Nine-Turn Immortal Bottle

This is my first time reading a book of this type, and I keep reading for more, and more, and more.

The author would like to tell you about his feelings about this book. The story has ups and downs, and I have the idea of ​​reading it. However, I feel that it tastes a bit like a prepared dish, and is also as mechanized as an AI song. The writing and narrative are quite satisfactory. From the beginning to the present, the content is a bit like a detective novel in which you are alone in the game. It lacks the usual narrative in the world of cultivation (a sense of immersion) and the foreshadowing of the motivation and advancement of cultivation. It always repeats new names of herbs, and it lacks a sense of sedimentation. The novel is okay for daily reading, and there is nothing wrong with it - it just seems to be missing something else. If it is to be treated as a good work.

#Circlezhucorrected# The second "source" was written incorrectly

Guys, please help me point out if the third chapter is poisonous.

#Circlezhucorrection# Illusions, typos

#Circlezhucorrected# Is there some contradiction in this paragraph? The effect of the medicine is insufficient, it cannot suppress the effect, and it is still reduced? Wouldn't it be more frail?

#Circlezhucorrected# The last eighty-six was written incorrectly as sixty-eight.

It's a bit superfluous. I wrote about refining a furnace of waste elixirs without blinking after a dozen spiritual stones.

#Circlezhujiaer# There is one more word, so delete it.

#Circlezhucorrected# Business? Modify it