Reincarnated as a Skeleton Soldier: I Start Out as the Dungeon's Villainous Demon King

The plot is very smooth and the writing style is very personal. I like it very much! And the setting is also particularly attractive to me. It's a rare different world theme, and the protagonist's character is also very likable. All in all, I like it very much! Come on, author!! I will always support you!!!

Because there is not much more, it is impossible to evaluate how the subsequent plot will develop. Judging from the current plot, it is quite interesting. In the first hundred chapters, the entire hidden thread of the book is basically laid out, and the sentences are still relatively smooth and relaxed. When I read book reviews, I always focus on criticism, so I will point out the current shortcomings of this book. Of course, this does not mean that the book is bad, nor does it mean that I have any objections to the author. 1. Traces of AI. In the first few chapters, the text is very white, without any superfluous description. However, there is a strong sense of living people, and although there are too many jokes, it is still effective. However, after more than 60 chapters, traces of AI appear in some places, and it becomes more and more obvious. The author must control it and make sufficient changes based on the help of AI. 2. The plot logic is simple, the various strategies are relatively subjective, and the characters' words and deeds lack core motivations. Generally speaking, the plot trend is smooth, smooth to the point of being false and boring. However, if the author can maintain the relaxed style of the first dozens of chapters, it is not a bad idea to take a funny route and write a short story. 3. The problem of the combat power system. From the current framework, the combat power of the characters is relatively confusing. The main reason for the confusion is the incomplete world view structure: how big an empire should be in this world, how big a principality should be, how strong the church's control is, how many people can be involved in a conventional war here, which side will win in a head-to-head confrontation between the Legion and the Archmage, how strong the world's peak combat power should be... The author can take the time to sort out these issues. Overall, I think this is a novel that has great potential but also has many potential problems. If the author can be careful, it should be between "half-step first-class" and "half-step fine" according to my standards.

I especially like Lamb, a foodie girl.

The subject matter is very novel, even an old bookworm like me is addicted to it.

Why don't Mi Gao join in and be the heroine?

The plot is novel and has the feel of an RPG game. Fortunately, there are no surprises so far. It is more relaxed and funny. I have read 60 chapters and it is still in the early stages. I think it is okay. I am waiting for the update.

It's very interesting and the plot is also good. I hope the author will update it soon.

Today, I revised the previous chapters and deleted some contents. Overall, there is one missing chapter. So this chapter, actually, is a new chapter. (Dear viewers from 23:56 on the 23rd to 15:48 on the 24th, this chapter is a new chapter! In addition, there will be two more chapters in the evening!) Finally, the second test is coming soon. Wish me all the best! (I really don't want to be cut into pieces... Cry.)

PS: (I failed the first test, alas... Can I still not do it despite the theme of another world and my thunderous writing style?) (Now I can only change the text and hope for the second test. Bless me⁽⁽(੭ꐦ•̀Д•́)੭*⁾⁾!!)

I'm stuck tonight... I'll sort out my thoughts and I'll update tomorrow