Poison Doctor of the Border Army, Those Who Obey Me Will Live, Those Who Go Against Me Will Die.

Only Li Xu has a serious name, and indeed the male protagonist has a halo

The number of words is too few and it's not enough to read.

Finally we have a new book from Brother Qiufeng

I've read all four of Qiu Feng's books! Except for the first book, the following three books can all be evaluated in short and concise terms! The overall writing style of these four books is online and the overall readability is very high. What a pity! Let's call it Qiu Duan from now on!

I started commenting after reading more than 100 chapters. The writing is still wonderful and the details are good, but to be honest, because the setting range is too small, it is not easy to start writing. According to the personal summary of Qiu Feng's writing style by Master Tianshi of the Ming Dynasty, the first is that the plot is very clever, the second is that the characters are realistic and full, the third is that the debate is wonderful, and the fourth is that there is appropriate laughter and laughter. Qiu Feng should give full play to these four advantages! It is easier to write novels about cultivating immortals. It is easier to write about upgrading and fighting monsters. If you change the scene, just describe the scenery and change the enemy to practice martial arts. Hunting for treasures and buying things will take several chapters. In addition, the description of the protagonist Li Xu in this article is too little. It feels like he only appears when he needs to appear, which is not natural enough. In addition, it is recommended to add more majestic descriptions of the desert border.

Much better than ordinary ones

The writing is quite good, the plot arrangement is reasonable, and the writing is a bit refreshing, but not too excessive. Except for some sections that are a bit slow and have too many descriptions, the overall shortcomings are not hidden and it is still worth watching.

There are so many quarrels on the front line... I even wrote a few chapters to reason...

Qiu Feng's books are always good-looking

By Chapter 79, the plot has lost its highlights, and the setting has become fragmented. The luck plot is suitable for non-travelers to change their lives in desperate situations, or to help time-travelers improve themselves. A time traveler who lives by luck might as well expect God to kill all his enemies with lightning.