On the eve of his tribulation, Huo Zheng should have smoothly ascended to immortality. Instead, the five stunning disciples he had raised with his own hands turned on him together.
His dantian shattered, his cultivation gone.
He thought he would have to scrape out a miserable existence on Mount Fangcun, trapped by them for the rest of his life.
But just as he happened upon a homeless child blessed with the luck of the Heavenly Dao and prepared to take him in as his final, closed-door disciple,
the immortals saw a tenderness in their master that he had never shown them, and all of them panicked.
The title of the book has nothing to do with the content. The author will update soon.
The protagonist is an unparalleled hero who dotes on his disciples unconditionally. As a result, he causes a group of disasters. After his Dantian is broken, he is trapped on the mountain. In order to prevent the disaster, he recruits the sixth child. In fact, the answer was revealed early on. The sixth child will be the calamity in three years, but the protagonist does not know how. The apprentices take turns to kick the nose and face, and play with him. The protagonist is incompetent and furious, and at the same time his mother's heart is overflowing. He lives like a dog... The writing is smooth, the setting is good, and the logic is like that of a female author. Unfortunately, it is not my cup of tea. If you are looking for abuse, you can read it.
This book is also very good. It's the author. Why haven't you updated it yet? I stopped updating for one day.
It's already 120,000 words long. Wherever I can run away, I can only see Momoji. It's estimated that I can't even run away after 200,000 words.
The current writing style and plot settings are quite reasonable.
Good reviews
First of all, I think the subject matter is novel and interesting, and then the character templates are well drawn and consistent with the personality, the plot extends naturally, and the writing style is okay, at least there are few typos. But I think it may be written and completed quickly. After all, the section is only that small, and it is easy to write some poisonous points (such as character stories).
All in all, I think this work is very writeable and I like it very much. I wish you a happy new book and work hard on writing.
The title of the book has nothing to do with the content. The author will update soon.
The protagonist is an unparalleled hero who dotes on his disciples unconditionally. As a result, he causes a group of disasters. After his Dantian is broken, he is trapped on the mountain. In order to prevent the disaster, he recruits the sixth child. In fact, the answer was revealed early on. The sixth child will be the calamity in three years, but the protagonist does not know how. The apprentices take turns to kick the nose and face, and play with him. The protagonist is incompetent and furious, and at the same time his mother's heart is overflowing. He lives like a dog... The writing is smooth, the setting is good, and the logic is like that of a female author. Unfortunately, it is not my cup of tea. If you are looking for abuse, you can read it.
This book is also very good. It's the author. Why haven't you updated it yet? I stopped updating for one day.
It's already 120,000 words long. Wherever I can run away, I can only see Momoji. It's estimated that I can't even run away after 200,000 words. The current writing style and plot settings are quite reasonable.
Good reviews First of all, I think the subject matter is novel and interesting, and then the character templates are well drawn and consistent with the personality, the plot extends naturally, and the writing style is okay, at least there are few typos. But I think it may be written and completed quickly. After all, the section is only that small, and it is easy to write some poisonous points (such as character stories). All in all, I think this work is very writeable and I like it very much. I wish you a happy new book and work hard on writing.