There’s not much in the martial world worth praising. Lu Zhi’s legs are about the only remarkable thing!
Xu An transmigrates into the world of Sword of Coming, landing beyond the Great Wall of Sword Qi from the start.
At death’s door, he encounters Lu Zhi, who is out on a trial, awakens his golden finger, and begins his path of slaying demons!
He hunts monsters and demons, absorbing their origins into himself, cultivating both martial and spiritual power, and merging with the original world!
When A Liang arrives at the Great Wall of Sword Qi, the martial world becomes dull;
when Chen Ping’an reaches the Great Wall of Sword Qi, Xu An has already become a legend;
and when the fourteen throne-seated kings of the Wilds lead their armies to the border, using their might to threaten the Vast World,
Ning Yao steps forward. “We’re waiting for Xu An. Are you waiting to die?”
One figure sits alone atop the Great Wall of Sword Qi. Two worlds look up to him!
The writing is very good, but can you update two chapters a day? This chapter is pitiful.
It's a very cool and refreshing article, but the author is not suitable for writing fan fiction. The mentality of the person in Jianlai is too different from this book. It's like they have the same name and the same surname. Just like the original work, Ah Liang will never say a certain sentence. The boss Jianxian will not take the initiative to meet the protagonist. It's very embarrassing to watch.
There is no rigor at all. 15-Year-old Ning Yao's parents are still there, and the Thirteenth War has not happened yet! ? In The Thirteenth Controversy, Ning Yao is 10 or 14 years old. These are the two answers that can be found, because 16 years old is the Ning Yao who was at the beginning of the original book! There is also 15-year-old Ning Yao. At this time, A Liang is still an immortal? Does this mean that he reached the peak of his ascension when the original novel started a year later? Everyone's protagonist?
There are too many typos, the realm of the characters in it fluctuates between high and low, and even a person can be in two realms in the same chapter, poisonous! What the hell
The realm is improving rapidly, but everything is still cut off
I feel like the author has nothing left to write, and he takes Chen Pingan away to be a nanny again. To be honest, I don't think it's wrong to help Chen Pingan, but I don't think this is the reason for you to choose to be a nanny. Even if he is curious, to put it bluntly, he still has strength but does not have the temperament to match his strength. Because you just know what he will be like, but even without you, he won't be any worse. So I think it might be easier to write about Chen Pingan, but to put it bluntly, it may not grow to that level. But as an author, I can write whatever I want.
Are there too many typos?
The quick update is not enough. Is the protagonist's strength rising too fast?
It's beautiful and fast-paced
The writing is very good, but can you update two chapters a day? This chapter is pitiful.
It's a very cool and refreshing article, but the author is not suitable for writing fan fiction. The mentality of the person in Jianlai is too different from this book. It's like they have the same name and the same surname. Just like the original work, Ah Liang will never say a certain sentence. The boss Jianxian will not take the initiative to meet the protagonist. It's very embarrassing to watch.
There is no rigor at all. 15-Year-old Ning Yao's parents are still there, and the Thirteenth War has not happened yet! ? In The Thirteenth Controversy, Ning Yao is 10 or 14 years old. These are the two answers that can be found, because 16 years old is the Ning Yao who was at the beginning of the original book! There is also 15-year-old Ning Yao. At this time, A Liang is still an immortal? Does this mean that he reached the peak of his ascension when the original novel started a year later? Everyone's protagonist?
There are too many typos, the realm of the characters in it fluctuates between high and low, and even a person can be in two realms in the same chapter, poisonous! What the hell
The realm is improving rapidly, but everything is still cut off
I feel like the author has nothing left to write, and he takes Chen Pingan away to be a nanny again. To be honest, I don't think it's wrong to help Chen Pingan, but I don't think this is the reason for you to choose to be a nanny. Even if he is curious, to put it bluntly, he still has strength but does not have the temperament to match his strength. Because you just know what he will be like, but even without you, he won't be any worse. So I think it might be easier to write about Chen Pingan, but to put it bluntly, it may not grow to that level. But as an author, I can write whatever I want.
Are there too many typos?
The quick update is not enough. Is the protagonist's strength rising too fast?
Would it be better to switch to Qi Tingji?