In the third hundred years of Da Xuan Li, monsters besieged the city. One hundred thousand border troops in the north guarded Liang Pass. Human lives were worth less than the bricks on the city wall.
Shen Yuan traveled to this ghost place and started out as a refugee who had been hungry for three days. His only possessions were a curled hatchet and a skinny cat-like sister.
Good thing he had a panel.
You get points for killing monsters, and you get points for eating monster meat. You can increase your proficiency by practicing spear stabbing, and you can add points wherever you want.
His body climbed up from the edge of starvation little by little, killing wild dogs, slaying gray wolves, fighting monsters, and defeating monster generals; he went from beginner to proficient in spear stabbing, and then he could defeat thousands of armies with one shot.
The chief said he was born with a spear; the captain said he could be of great use; the general poured him wine with his own hands; the demon tribe named him "Human Tu".
The border army said: There is a deep abyss in Liangguan, and all the monsters dare not go forward.
The court said: There is a spear king in the north, and the country will be safe.
The demon god said: If this person is not eliminated, the demon clan will never have peace.
Shen Yuan thrust the gun into the ground, looked back at the Liangguan city wall behind him, and said:
"I joined the army just to have enough food to eat."
It's a bit uncomfortable, it's a bit like a suspense plot. There are monsters but no martial arts. Maybe it's because I haven't watched it enough, but I really don't have the desire to watch it anymore. And I can still find food while escaping. It doesn't matter. Others are starving to death, but I can still obey the rules and not grab it.
Listen to everyone, after writing thirty chapters, you will close the book. At least leave a good impression on everyone. What I wrote later is purely to discredit myself.
I don't know what I'm writing, it's so confusing
Are demons that smart? Does the demon have the patience to lay the foreshadowing? Since the demon can activate the beast tide, your scene is totally different. There are also combined beasts and living zombies. Are you writing about monsters or zombies? Will the wolf sacrifice also drive away corpses?
It's ridiculous that a border town needs to be saved by a refugee who has only been in the army for a few days. He has no backup plan at all.
A beacon fire is just a few piles of stones and a few wooden boards. It's funny.
The wooden gun handle is multi-functional and more durable than all metal. What about coaxing ghosts?
I can't stand it anymore, it's so chaotic. Is this demon slaying? Is this suspense?
This is either AI or the author is a high school student. After reading the first two chapters, my three views were shattered. There are people who are escaping from the desert like the protagonist and can find food in a small forest. Snakes that are hibernating can come out to bask in the sun. After finding food, these people who are about to starve to death can watch you eat and play.
Town, a broken door, Chapter 10, 1 bone, Chapter 15, the rest is just drinking and I don't know where to put it. You should rush more when the time comes. The system is so frustrating to write. Are you a male writer or a female writer?
I don't know why, but I feel that this book is very similar to something written on an AI website I used before, and I can't stand it anymore.
Grinding and chirping, like this and that
This is written in a weird way, and it seems that I have lost sight of it.
It's a bit uncomfortable, it's a bit like a suspense plot. There are monsters but no martial arts. Maybe it's because I haven't watched it enough, but I really don't have the desire to watch it anymore. And I can still find food while escaping. It doesn't matter. Others are starving to death, but I can still obey the rules and not grab it.
Listen to everyone, after writing thirty chapters, you will close the book. At least leave a good impression on everyone. What I wrote later is purely to discredit myself.
I don't know what I'm writing, it's so confusing
Are demons that smart? Does the demon have the patience to lay the foreshadowing? Since the demon can activate the beast tide, your scene is totally different. There are also combined beasts and living zombies. Are you writing about monsters or zombies? Will the wolf sacrifice also drive away corpses? It's ridiculous that a border town needs to be saved by a refugee who has only been in the army for a few days. He has no backup plan at all. A beacon fire is just a few piles of stones and a few wooden boards. It's funny. The wooden gun handle is multi-functional and more durable than all metal. What about coaxing ghosts?
I can't stand it anymore, it's so chaotic. Is this demon slaying? Is this suspense?
This is either AI or the author is a high school student. After reading the first two chapters, my three views were shattered. There are people who are escaping from the desert like the protagonist and can find food in a small forest. Snakes that are hibernating can come out to bask in the sun. After finding food, these people who are about to starve to death can watch you eat and play.
Town, a broken door, Chapter 10, 1 bone, Chapter 15, the rest is just drinking and I don't know where to put it. You should rush more when the time comes. The system is so frustrating to write. Are you a male writer or a female writer?
I don't know why, but I feel that this book is very similar to something written on an AI website I used before, and I can't stand it anymore.
Grinding and chirping, like this and that
This is written in a weird way, and it seems that I have lost sight of it.