After failing the college entrance examination, Song Yan was ridiculed by his classmates as not being good at studying. Why not abandon literature and join martial arts as soon as possible?
[The system of listening to the advice is activated. If you follow the advice and join the army, write and join the army, the reward will be: the physique of the King of Soldiers]
However, next, something uncontrollable happened!
Ranked first in the recruit company, his physical fitness is unparalleled.
The first reconnaissance company, its combat power swept across all directions.
The entire army ranks first in the martial arts competition, and the spearman deserves the title.
The first in the selection of special forces, brutally tormenting all the kings of soldiers.
The envious old classmate said: "I just said it casually, why did you take it seriously!"
Leader: "This is not a young master soldier, it is clearly the soldier king Miaozi!"
Military Region Commander: "This guy must be dug out for me!"
Excellent shooting, strong physical fitness, high combat skills, good command...
Song Yan went further and further on the road of listening to advice.
When the two-year compulsory military service expired, Song's father was going to pick up his son from the army, but found that his good-for-nothing son had been robbed crazy by the entire army!
Father Song: Son, don't get promoted. Come back and inherit the family business. Our family really has a mine!
Song Yan: Dad, how about you practice trumpet? Your son and I are going to be a general soon!
In fact, I feel that the protagonist will not be able to use this system. If this system is outrageous, he should directly post on the forum saying I want to be a superman. If you have any suggestions, the system can be completed and I can directly become a superman. Even if this system is ordinary and can only give some real items on the forum, it is faster to post suggestions on receiving goods on the forum than to get rewards like this.
It's just so-so, but it's cliche later on. Basically, they are all shadows of film and television dramas.
Why is there a charge? Everything that was free before has been charged.
The AI traces are a bit serious, almost meaningless
The beginning is really good, and the middle is also okay. What is written in the back, an actual battle, and then all the competition with my own people. I kept competing until the end. I formed a small team and said that it could not be seen in the light or let people know. In the end, I went to the city to save people. After that, I have been practicing and competing. I admire it.
The plot is too bland, especially in the later stages, which is all about narrative, nothing particularly outstanding, and it's also unfinished.
? Is this the end? It's too hasty.
There is an extra paragraph, the author remembered to delete it
What you wrote is messy and not logical at all.
In international competitions, the players sent out are just like reckless men, with no brains at all.
In fact, I feel that the protagonist will not be able to use this system. If this system is outrageous, he should directly post on the forum saying I want to be a superman. If you have any suggestions, the system can be completed and I can directly become a superman. Even if this system is ordinary and can only give some real items on the forum, it is faster to post suggestions on receiving goods on the forum than to get rewards like this.
It's just so-so, but it's cliche later on. Basically, they are all shadows of film and television dramas.
Why is there a charge? Everything that was free before has been charged.
The AI traces are a bit serious, almost meaningless
The beginning is really good, and the middle is also okay. What is written in the back, an actual battle, and then all the competition with my own people. I kept competing until the end. I formed a small team and said that it could not be seen in the light or let people know. In the end, I went to the city to save people. After that, I have been practicing and competing. I admire it.
The plot is too bland, especially in the later stages, which is all about narrative, nothing particularly outstanding, and it's also unfinished.
? Is this the end? It's too hasty.
There is an extra paragraph, the author remembered to delete it
What you wrote is messy and not logical at all.
In international competitions, the players sent out are just like reckless men, with no brains at all.