A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Starting with 300,000 Draws of My Blade

Let's see what happens next.

I first came from the AI ​​short drama. I think it started well at the beginning, but in the middle it really stretched my hips, and it's been very stretched till now. In fact, ever since his sister-in-law, Miss Qin, and his little niece were sent to Longxiang City, he should have improved his strength at a very fast speed. I thought he would write like this, but who knew that he would actually finish writing politics there, and also play it very childishly, in a world where strength is respected, where are you playing politics? It's not a problem for you, a ninth-grade warrior, to unify the wasteland, but what happens next? Going to war with those big dynasties? There are probably quite a few people in the great dynasty who have reached the upper three realms. Then what are you going to do? Can you train Du Gang and the others to the upper three realms as well? Do they have this qualification? Have you ever thought there was a big problem with your outline?

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The update is too slow, there are a lot of gold coins that cannot be used

I don't recommend everyone to read it. The first 100 or so chapters are pretty good, but then it gets weird for no reason, and its attitude towards women is so weird.

It's so similar to that thing, and it's a holy object, a holy monument. That novel has quantified values. It's all a routine.

The content is repeated. The author should show his inspiration and correct it quickly.

380 And 381 have the same content

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There are several problems: 1. There is a problem with the framework concept and it needs to be overhauled. It is too subjective and unreasonable: for example, the relocation of Didan Sect is too hasty, the construction of Fengqi Walled City and regional control, and the world view of Huang Rui are too vague. 2. The protagonist is indecisive in his characterization, and it is difficult to achieve great things: a protagonist is "raped" and has a child, but there is no incident, and he plays with the white lotus and the Virgin in a ruins that eats people without spitting out their bones. 3. The development of the plot is slow and there is basically no response from before and after. To sum up, the outline should be correct, the character construction and the direction of the story plot should be planned in advance, rather than just writing whatever you think, and just writing whatever you want.