[Wuxia fan fiction + making up for past regrets + perfect ending]
Linghu Feng transmigrates.
When he wakes up, he finds himself in the body of Linghu Chong, the biggest ingrate in the world of Jin Yong’s novels.
Facing Yue Buqun, who raised him for over a decade; Ning Zhongze, who doted on him like a mother for just as long; and his childhood sweetheart, his junior sister, Linghu Feng suddenly thinks: The least I can do is act like a decent person!
In the original story, Yue Buqun is forced to ruin himself and practice a forbidden technique because his prized disciple has turned out to be a failure, becoming neither male nor female.
Ning Zhongze is harassed by members of the Demon Sect. Despairing, she breaks down and takes her own life.
Even his beloved junior sister is stabbed to death by Lin Pingzhi like a piece of trash.
Linghu Feng: Since I’ve transmigrated here, none of these tragedies can happen. I’ll put on a grand show of a loving father and filial son, joining hands to unite the martial world!
In general, the plot logic is not very reasonable and bland.
Confused thinking, disordered logic
A well-informed modern person only has a little cleverness but no great wisdom. The words and deeds of the characters are entirely to serve the plot.
In the early stage, the plot and character descriptions were reasonable, there were some ideas in the middle, and they were acceptable. Later, it was completely let go.
If you re-evaluate, it will be a waste of time
I just read the first 15 chapters. It's okay to use Linghu Chong's style to disappoint Yue Buqun and lead to the tragic ending of Yue Buqun and the Huashan Sect. But the writing is really not flattering. You keep writing your opinions over and over again, but I can't say it's your fault. It's obvious that you don't have a clear writing context.
You can take a look at it earlier. The writing is quite good, but starting from Chapter 192, who has taken over your life as the author? All of a sudden I had no idea at all.
You can read a book to see the person. I think the author is the kind of person who should be established.
The first few dozen chapters are good, but you don't need to read the rest. There is no logic in what follows. The woman in it has no IQ when she meets the protagonist, just like a puppet meets its master.
The first part was okay, but the second part got worse and worse, and the martial arts turned into fantasy.
In general, the plot logic is not very reasonable and bland.
Confused thinking, disordered logic
A well-informed modern person only has a little cleverness but no great wisdom. The words and deeds of the characters are entirely to serve the plot.
In the early stage, the plot and character descriptions were reasonable, there were some ideas in the middle, and they were acceptable. Later, it was completely let go.
If you re-evaluate, it will be a waste of time
I just read the first 15 chapters. It's okay to use Linghu Chong's style to disappoint Yue Buqun and lead to the tragic ending of Yue Buqun and the Huashan Sect. But the writing is really not flattering. You keep writing your opinions over and over again, but I can't say it's your fault. It's obvious that you don't have a clear writing context.
You can take a look at it earlier. The writing is quite good, but starting from Chapter 192, who has taken over your life as the author? All of a sudden I had no idea at all.
You can read a book to see the person. I think the author is the kind of person who should be established.
The first few dozen chapters are good, but you don't need to read the rest. There is no logic in what follows. The woman in it has no IQ when she meets the protagonist, just like a puppet meets its master.
The first part was okay, but the second part got worse and worse, and the martial arts turned into fantasy.