Don't Go

Persevere, don't get lost, and let your feelings become full and mature as you grow up. The lines are smooth and the ending is happy, which probably beats many people's guesses. Maybe, the novel is less dramatic, but isn't that what our real lives are like? It is said that this novel is the author's first attempt. Like it! The future is promising! Come on!

Facing the complicated world, Xiao Yuan and Gu Lai did not become depressed after experiencing a breakup. Instead, they hid their lost feelings in their hearts and transformed them into the strength of struggle. Although they were tested, they did not get lost. Don't leave became their silent call for their past feelings.

The two Xiao Yuans exchanged shells, and a true love finally continued because of the resolution of a misunderstanding. There are no major ups and downs in the novel, but the emotional lines between Xiao Yuan, Gu Lai, and Chen Jin are fragile and have the possibility of multiple directions. The author does not play tricks to attract attention. Instead, he returns to the changes that may exist every day in our real life, the insights that exist every day, bit by bit, the kind of gradient that is as big as a nanometer. It should be noted that each of us, doesn't it happen every day like this, that we grow up, mature, and grow old little by little?

Thanks to the two Fangs for their high praise. I had never thought of receiving such a review for my first novel, and I am not worthy of it. It was my first time to write a short novel, and many details were lacking. Also because of my meager life experience, the novel was not full of content. The two teachers must have noticed it, but they did not mention it because they encouraged newcomers. I will continue to work hard on writing novels in the future, hoping to make progress in the future and live up to the encouragement of the two teachers.

This is a story about two girls redeeming each other, just like Xiao Yuan's famous novel mentioned in the article. There are two girls, one is lively and the other is calm. The author controls the tone of the text so that the readers are not confused between the two Xiao Yuan, which shows his writing skills. The storyline combines fiction and reality, the novel and reality are seamlessly connected, and the identities of the original owner and the host are nested. Such a complex structure especially tests the author's control of details. The author polishes the details in a eloquent way without leaving any trace, which is amazing. With the ability to build structures and the skills of exquisite decoration, in time, he will become everyone!