Jian Lai: Pure Sword Cultivating in the Fourteenth Realm, Let's Fight Zou Zi First

The book is actually well written, and the writing style is good. The problem is that the author is too arrogant and disrespects the original work. There are many places that are very different from the original work. When readers point it out, they just say "I am not allowed to change it as a fan fiction." Moreover, it has the same big problem as the original work. There are too many descriptions and explanations, which makes it cumbersome. As everyone knows, there are many people who think "Jian Lai" is well written, but there are even more people who can't finish "Jian Lai"

Except for the names, everything is not in line with the realm and is wrong. You can't change it like this when changing the humanities. At least respect the original work.

I feel like there is something wrong with the protagonist, he is inexplicably super heroic

After reading the previous point, I feel that it is inexplicably super hero. After reading other comments, it is confirmed that it is super hero.

Zou Zi said nothing and just took the sword.

It does look a bit like a general manager.

This is one of the highest level fanfics I have read so far. I hope the author can finish it.

Fellow Taoists, please wait a little while for me to come with the Emperor Taoist soldiers.

There is a long way to go in the world, if we are destined, we will see you soon

Chen Pingan: I really thank you