The Interstellar Commander Is Head over Heels for Me! The Useless Real Heiress Is a Total Badass

I'm very sorry that I read a little bit and wrote a hasty book review, but I really can't help but want to express my opinion. The author may want to focus on the main plot of face-slapping tasks to increase the enjoyment, so basically every supporting character I encounter is very brainless. When encountering the heroine, he automatically subdues the heroine and provokes the heroine and then gets slapped in the face and apologizes. However, the heroine shows her soothing ability in public. Everyone in the live broadcast room can see it. The two female supporting characters around the adopted daughter can also think that the heroine is cheating. . In addition, when the male protagonist was sent to protect the female protagonist, the adopted daughter said a few tea words in the first year of the year, and she began to think that the female protagonist was being unreasonable. . He's already a famous brand, so he's already a soldier that the male protagonist trusts, right? Is this his IQ? Then the male protagonist did the same. After hearing that his two men were sent back, he called them over to cool them down. He got angry and rearranged people to protect them. They were released without reprimand or punishment. . Then the male protagonist inexplicably fell in love with the female protagonist and acted like a crazy person while watching her live broadcast. . . There are also occasional character breakdowns. When Nian Yi insists on helping deliver gifts, the heroine suddenly gets angry and says that she is the only real daughter and she is just an adopted daughter. All of a sudden, the calm boss temperament was gone, and he turned into a delicate daughter. It was not very satisfying to be slapped in the face by various supporting characters, and it was a bit boring. Of course, the main thing that made me unable to stand it was the fact that the male protagonist completely broke his character and suddenly gave the female protagonist gifts, then asked to be added as a friend with a crazy look on his face, and even asked the female protagonist to sing and use the female lead's song as a ringtone. . . In fact, if the description is more detailed and the male protagonist is not written so cheaply, it is not unacceptable. For example, the male protagonist has a cold face and does not say anything but collects songs with a sullen face. The contrast is acceptable. But I think I still can't accept this kind of sudden collapse of the character.

The main plot is like splicing together fragments, and the logic is often lost; the writing style is stiff and the reading is sluggish. All the supporting characters seem to be tools serving the protagonist, and their behavior is deliberately witty. The most uncomfortable thing is the heroine. She clearly holds the trump card but chooses to be infinitely patient. Her character is inconsistent. Overall, I am disappointed and would not recommend it.

When I read this book, I felt that the clowns were quite stupid, especially the three brothers who had no eyesight at all. It felt like they had been forcibly reduced to intelligence, as if they had no IQ. So I am either criticizing people or on the way to criticize them. I may have said some unpleasant things in the process, so I hope you can forgive me. There are also a lot of typos and some sentences are not fluent. Some pitfalls were not filled in, just like they were left half-written. For example, the heroine's mother was rescued after a few hasty strokes. Later, the heroine's mother was not mentioned at all, and it felt like a minor supporting role. The writing is average, but there is one paragraph that I like very much, "Don't stop chasing the wind and the moon. There are spring mountains everywhere. I wish each of us can break through ourselves, surpass our limits, and become the best version of ourselves." (This is what the heroine said in her speech.) The heroine's mission has not been completed. She didn't write it before she became famous throughout the interstellar world. The ending is a bit hasty. Many people who like to watch slap-in-the-face plots can read this book. It's a pity that I didn't see them getting married. I hope the author will make a side story. The author is probably a novice writer. I think his/her writing is pretty good, so I will give you a good review. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write a more exciting book next time! (∗ᵒ̶̶̷̀ω˂̶́∗)੭₎₎̊₊♡

Is it my imagination? Why are there so many typos? I feel like the sentences don't make sense

Sometimes Gu Shi can pretend to learn Gu Jiao's skills