Five Years Guarding the Scrap Pill Room, I Prove the Dao and Become an Immortal by Turning Trash into Treasure

I have read more than a hundred chapters to get to the first level of Qi training, and I also have a system. It depends on what book you have written, do you still want to write it? Is anyone else watching?

The male protagonist improves his strength too slowly. After reading more than a hundred chapters, he is still struggling at the bottom.

Everywhere I go, someone will come looking for trouble. It's too poisonous.

Can you stop writing the supporting characters in such a weak-minded manner? The immortal ancestors who were quite good at the beginning are now portrayed as clowns one by one, and they are all reduced to jokes to contrast the male protagonist. Does the author think it looks good? Do you think a male protagonist contrasted by a bunch of clowns would be attractive? The supporting characters are not well portrayed, and the protagonist who is used as a contrast to the supporting characters is naturally not much better. The current protagonist's personality is too different from the previous one, and the current personality is so bad that he can't feel any personality charm.

Fully support the masterpiece and let your " After guarding the waste alchemy room for five years, I became an immortal by turning waste into treasures. "The journey was red and red, big top!

To be honest, starting from Chapter 500, why did the cultivator become Cthulhu? Forced battle of wits, I can't stand it anymore.

The greedy and stupid pig's feet, the villain who is like a staff, the plot that is taken for granted, and the heroine who is bitch and accurate. This book is too boring to read without thinking.

I am exposed everywhere, and I say I have to endure it everywhere.

I used Doubao to analyze this chapter. Doubao said that the author only wrote 1.1% Of it himself. Why is this platform full of AI hydrology?

The scene is very messy and the writing level is very average.